Last edited by Penskills; March 3rd, 2004 at 08:01 PM
Replied to: scott free
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This was alright i thought....your structure could use some work though i think, try keeping your lines around the same length so its structured good and so it helps out the flow...you had some ok multies, try using more...but overall this was alright i thought...keep at it.
yo...that was aight...i couldnt really catch the hits and the flow wasnt doin much but it was aight overall...like Masta C said keep at it...peace.
all and all a solid peace your climax fell short and set up was a lil off but all in all this was a good start and i look forward to seeing more
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
..thanks for the feedbacks...if you have time...read my new post...thanks...
jus work on your structure and flow and you'll be straight nigga
I feel what you trying to do but it ain't working.
dis topic was kinda whack but o.k. and by da way you flow I can tell your a newbie, but practice will make your rap iller!!!!
beter luck next time nigga
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ya structure needed work and ya flow elevate some but this was ok
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