Alright Man Spit First
OneMeanSaltine
Crooked-Comical
Alright Man Spit First
Checkin in yo....I spit first huh? this otta be fun anyway...good luck dawg....................................
It ain't even funny now the way we freak chicks, my waves make ladies seasick, I'm so so def like a JD remix!"
-Paul Kain, Fire Remix, Street Dreams Vol.2 #9
"I bet you feel stupid, I have to confess the truth is, bullet proof vest on my chest so I can't get shot by cupid...MAN MAN I'M DA MAN!" Chamillionaire, My Money Gets Jealous, Get Ya Mind Correct, #1
"Peak-a-boo, my mouth is a picture show, ice grow from the tip to the lip below, I'm thinkin 3 Karrats on every tooth" Paul Wall, Thinkin Throed, Get Ya Mind Correct, #3
OMS back wit his chronic+belief,
I only battled this dude for comic+relief
Just lay the battle and I'm on+it+wit+beef,
My pockets packed like a sauna+wit+heat,
If I detect neglect of respect I'm eject a set from the tech,
Let it Bisect your neck, disect your chest, and inject where you digest,
Crooked little man wit a crooked little verse,
Get sent down a crooked road in a crooked little hurse,
Dude needs a mortician, fuck callin a nurse to patch+him+up,
Drive back through kill you wife, as for yo kids, snatch+em+up.
It ain't even funny now the way we freak chicks, my waves make ladies seasick, I'm so so def like a JD remix!"
-Paul Kain, Fire Remix, Street Dreams Vol.2 #9
"I bet you feel stupid, I have to confess the truth is, bullet proof vest on my chest so I can't get shot by cupid...MAN MAN I'M DA MAN!" Chamillionaire, My Money Gets Jealous, Get Ya Mind Correct, #1
"Peak-a-boo, my mouth is a picture show, ice grow from the tip to the lip below, I'm thinkin 3 Karrats on every tooth" Paul Wall, Thinkin Throed, Get Ya Mind Correct, #3
Alright Nice .. Good Luck To You To Man
Im The King Of The ~Castle~ Your A Dirty ~Rascal~ In My Court Yard / /
Steppin To Me Your ~Ass Will~ Get Fucked Up Like My Report Card / /
This Is A ~Mismatch~, I ~Dispatch~ ~This Rap~ With Power / /
This ~Bitch is Crap~ , Ill ~Diss His Ass~ And He'll Get Devoured / /
Like The Twin Towers , Your Gettin Demolished / /
You Suck And You Got Less Potential Then An Alcoholic / /
Im The Best , You Cant Contest Youll Get Messed By My Text / /
You Have No Experiance , Like A Priest And A Nun Havin Sex* / /
You Shouldnt Even Step To Me , In Music Im Ruthless / /
I Raise The Roof So Much We No Longer Know Where The Roof Is / /
Peace
* Priests And Nuns Cannot Have Sex Because They Sighn A Vow When Becoming Them
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Both yall was hot but i gotta give more props 2 croked wit that nun and priest line but u get props 2 saltine
CoCo aka Nicole
Thanx Man .. if Only you Had 100 Posts Your Vote Would Count
Damn
Thanx anyways Man
Uppppppin *********************** # 1 ************************************************** ***************
they don't sign nything dog, they take i meaning it's a promise between them and God, nothin is signed, nice punchline though...
It ain't even funny now the way we freak chicks, my waves make ladies seasick, I'm so so def like a JD remix!"
-Paul Kain, Fire Remix, Street Dreams Vol.2 #9
"I bet you feel stupid, I have to confess the truth is, bullet proof vest on my chest so I can't get shot by cupid...MAN MAN I'M DA MAN!" Chamillionaire, My Money Gets Jealous, Get Ya Mind Correct, #1
"Peak-a-boo, my mouth is a picture show, ice grow from the tip to the lip below, I'm thinkin 3 Karrats on every tooth" Paul Wall, Thinkin Throed, Get Ya Mind Correct, #3
OK!
UPPPIN # 2 ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******************************
shit both yall was hott heres tha breakdown
flow-crooked
opener-both
closer-both
body-crooked
multis-crooked(saltine tried but no sense made
vote-Crooked
thats cool yo, but where did I make no sense? it's pretty obvious in there, I have been doin this for a while...you need to poll your vote too...
It ain't even funny now the way we freak chicks, my waves make ladies seasick, I'm so so def like a JD remix!"
-Paul Kain, Fire Remix, Street Dreams Vol.2 #9
"I bet you feel stupid, I have to confess the truth is, bullet proof vest on my chest so I can't get shot by cupid...MAN MAN I'M DA MAN!" Chamillionaire, My Money Gets Jealous, Get Ya Mind Correct, #1
"Peak-a-boo, my mouth is a picture show, ice grow from the tip to the lip below, I'm thinkin 3 Karrats on every tooth" Paul Wall, Thinkin Throed, Get Ya Mind Correct, #3
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multi's- tie (to many....annoyin)
meti4's- tie
punches- tie
structure- none (horrible both)
wordplay- none
flo- none
enjoyed- none
overall- tie (what can i say shit happens)
opener - crooked
punches - crooked
multis - one
personals - crooked
closer - crooked
weak battle yall elevate
Crooked-Comical won dis battle because of that nun punchline lmao. Dat shit was ill, had me laughin hard.
Im The Best , You Cant Contest Youll Get Messed By My Text / /
You Have No Experiance , Like A Priest And A Nun Havin Sex* / /
Ya both do need 2 fix up ur structure tho, but crooked's was better, atleast its closer 2 bein
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than OMS's.
Dont get me wrong, OMS had a pretty good verse, but u just need work on sum things like structure. Well u fix that stuff up, ur punches hit harder, and crooked's better structure allowed his punches 2 hit harder. Good job both of u.
Vote- crooked
Hit me up wit sum honest votes wit the battles in ma sig plz. thx.
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