CorPoRaL vs ReMiXeD Illusions

[Corporal]

10-14 Lines
3-0 TKO
5 - votes to win
no Hater/Dickryder/Unexplained votes

.. you know da deal ..

[Remixed Illusion]

aight checkin in yo,

waiten ya check in and verse,

then i'ma spit.

Good luck hommie.

peace.

[Corporal]

check in verse will be in by 20 minutes...thats the deadline cos it was set like 10 mins ago....12:30 AM GMT is limit

[Corporal]

I Fight Great..I'll Batter this Lightweight then Battle ya Team
An really Remix your Illusion when da tech Scramble ya GeNe's
You Aint ramping with me..believe im already telling ya sets wack
repping them yet fact is you can't even spell it correct cat
get mudered straight..short deadline but it was worth the wait
kid the only thing BACKing you in this Battle..is ya Vertabrae
Corp Fights an Bust..Spit Flames at you til you Igniting Bruh
Think you stole lines from the Earth..The way You Bite the Dust
Always Snipe at Fucks for protection..I stay shooting like a Striker
Its Obvious to me ya style needs Change like a Wet Diper
Corporals known for bruisin..theirs no confusing..this joke is losin
Thought you'd win?haha Remix got caught up in his own illusion

..hate explanations but..

REPRSENTIN
XLG'z
Xtremely Lyrical Gnagsta'z

thats his sig..(Incase he changes it upon readin this)

spelt representing and Gangsta'z wrong..

[Remixed Illusion]

Yo I'ma Take This Fake American Corporal Down A Few Ranks//
Crack A Few Punches On His Head And Let Him Say His Thanx//
This will B Brutal When I Humiliate This Prick, Showing Him To His Place//
Its Gon B Great When I Infilerate Ya Base, Put U To A Private, And Close Ya Case//
U Can Bring Ya Crew And Ur Cheap Ass Friends, But I have More Brains To Finish Ya Ends//
It Gon B Riot When Ya spit, Cuz U b Standin There Choked And Quit//
I'll B Laughin, Tha Fans Will B Clappin, And I'ma Say He's ON Lyrical Diet//
I'm Like Brain Surgeon, And Ur Tha Pacient, U Aint Gon Live It Gon B A Burden//
Jus Put Ya 6 Feet Deep, Lay In Ya Grave, Get Decomposed By Tha worms//
I'll Fight U Off As if I was White blood Cells And U was Tha Germs//

So For Tha End, I'll Finish U In A Layer Of My lyrical Web,
I'm Tha Spider And Ur Tha Fly, C Y Ya Gon Die,
I'll B Sucking Ya Inside Like Fluid, U got Merked Cuz u Played Me As If I Was Stupid//

[Remixed Illusion]

Aight Lets Get Some Muh Fukkin Votes Upin Here
And Don Forget To Poll Vote
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Uppin1..................
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peace.

[Corporal]

..can some one please post atleast 1 vote..

need to get those 5 wins so i can enter the next level..

[Crooked-Comical]

ALRIGHT LISTEN I ALWAYS VOTE FIRST THEN TELL PEOPLE TO RAPY FAVOUR AND VOTE ON MY BATTLE..BUT YALL ARE GETTIN LAZY SO I WANT U 2 TO GIVE HONEST VOTES ON MY 2 BATTLES THEN ILL VOTE ON YALLS

THANX

PEACE



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[Corporal]

i am not allowed to vote yet as i do not have either¨:

100 Posts

or

5 Wins

if i could vote i would definetely but wats the point when it wont count..

[Remixed Illusion]

Uppin for sum votes and don forget to poll vote hommies, holla at dis battle, cum'on kid, post sum shit holla Uppin 2

peace.

[dw.]

rite this was an alrite battle but im gonna giv an honest vote n say that corporal took this....breakdown...

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close although that looks 1-sided!