Alright Man Go Then Ill Go
%GoOfY%
Crooked-Comical
Alright Man Go Then Ill Go
slay-planes-a-death-on-my-place, while each day-grands-a-breath-ta-ma-face, but yo 'tryna serve me was a mistake', like a 'confeast-in-a-grace'...lol!!
murder-in-joy, bitch ya dick rider so much you're wording-ya-points, slays coming wit 'slant-hits', like 'curves-in-ya-"joints"...(understand)!!
how u gonna ignore-this, if this shit explores-kids, bitch 'wont get out a line', like getting boxed wit a 'cordless'...lol!!!
bricks-that-shine-in-visions, sick-wit-lines-n-bitching, but we going 'head-ta-head', like the 'sixty-nine-position'...lol!!
...(enough-joking-lets-get-serious)...
the endless-heat-from-a-verse, wit madness-that-speaks-of-the-worst, but "u" aint big, like 'lowercasing' the speech-in-these-'words'...(lowercasing-words)!!
...Im Tired Of Battling These Rookies...
Alright Yo ,
This Guy Thinks By "Typing-His-Words-Like-This " Hes Gunna Get Attention //
But Really His Wordplay Is So Gay Hes Given Himself An Erection //*
I Always ~ Storm Hard N Quick ~ , Even If you Beat Me, My Power Gets Re Summined //
Im Like A ~ Porn Stars Dick ~ I Just Keep Fuckin " Comin " //
Your ~ Dumb And You Shoow It ~ Your A ~ Chum Not A Poet ~ //
If Ryhmes Were Wealth Your A " Bum And You Know It ~ //
You Say " ...Im Tired Of Battling These Rookies... " , im Not Ammused //
You Are A Fukin Rookie , All Your Whack Wordplay Must Have You Confused //
Youll Get Bruised , Cut And Smashed Goin Aginst Me //
I Always Put My " Money Wear My Mouth IS " Till My Wallets Empty //
*Hed Give Him Self An Erection Cause Hes A Faggit
Nice Spit good Luck
opener - tie (neither very strong)
flow - Goof (more consistent and complex)
punches - CC
personals - CC
wordplay - Goof
Closing - Goof
Overall - Goof
Jacktheripherbs vs. debaser
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yo
flow/gooofy
style/gooofy
punches/draw
personals/draw
meta/none
multi/draw
open/gooofy
close/Kro0ked
overall/gooofy
vote/gooofy
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yo it ef but i dont even think u read our verses man .. he didnt have any personals.... oh well
peace
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flow:gooofy
style:gooofy
punches: tie
personals: tie
meta: none
multi: tie
open: gooofy
close: Krooked
overall: gooofy
could u guys vote on the battle iin my sig
What happened 2 2morrow, did u 4get it in ur bone marrow? ...Bitch.
crook took the closer and personals.... but goofy took the rest..... it was still close tho... feel elevatin.... cc try not to use sex punches..... vets hate that and it wont get u votes man..... sorry just a tip.... please hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99956
Man do people even Read Battles Anymore or Just Put Random Shit Down So They could Get people To vote on there battles?
Crook.... out of your 5 punches you had 2 sex lines.... those are PLAYED...... so that lost you punches..... you still killed him in personals =but he edged it.... and hmmm.... how is it not reading the battle when I critiqued? Drop a vote on mine
hey dominator sorry man i posted at the exact same time as you .... i wasnt reffering to you i was reffering to other 2 people who said we tied in personals
my bad man no beef..and ill vote on ya battle
peace
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COME ON YALL VOTE
shit this was a god battle!!!! very close!!!
flow=goof
punches=tie
structure=goof
vocab=tie
wordplay=goof
overal=goof
CROOK- you had a nice spit man. it had some nice punches and flow. the only thing is that goof came harder. he won by a hair.
~HoLsTeR A.K.A INKoherent~
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yo i think goof had nice flows rhyme word play but crook came back harder man.....
well i can't poll votes so my vote doesn't count
peace
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