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Thread: What is it to you? Ft/ aBoLisH

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    Termz
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    What is it to you? Ft/ aBoLisH

    The songs i sing consist of rhythm n' blues,
    when i`m not so jazzy, but unflashy in truth.
    before the incision was scars thru the mention,
    of gifts n' twisted wisdom given in a bars proof.
    she got me head over heels just sittin' with you,
    chit chattin', sit back n' max spittin with you.
    wether it's chillin' on the couch, playin' games,
    or makin' dates of future dates we`ll runaway.
    just me and you, it's only two and it's confusin',
    when it should've, could've been exclusive.
    maybe it's useless or we`ll use it for amusement,
    but the song i sing is, that feel good music.
    music - sounds of fluid, feathered by smoothness
    an oppritunity to do it, proven by bruises- the truest
    musician's carry out on multiple missions with precision
    of vision - and sheltering joy within it's own ambition
    And The goals are related, made for the entertainment
    so harmony remains legit, there's no explaination to it
    no can hate pertain to it, and the acceptance opens wide
    so - ignorant or shy, you can sit back and just vibe
    artists smoothly collide, to fulfil those incisions-
    with rhythm. grab ya fallen souls and just lift 'em
    a lifestyle of cultures, that's label renew-
    surpasses art itself - music, what is it to you?

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    You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

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    Your flow was good, and your struture was good too...
    now for the topic... I couldnt figure that out.... you had
    like 4 different topics... consisting of your rap style,
    your girl friend... and some other things... just work on
    stayin on one topic and your shit will be ill...
    ~AshY~
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    Termz
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    uppin for replies from real emcees

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    lyrical_killer
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    yo man,
    Your structure was OK and your topic was good...........needa work on some shit though.

  7. #7
    MD_killa
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    ayo dunny... dis is really actully coo peice

    i mean... structure was good... not alot of vocab...

    but yo the shyt was still hot... i was kinda gettin the vibe

    overall= 7.0/10

    good ish... keep elevatin

    Caesar On3

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