10 lines
i spit first
thas all the rules he said
but i just wanna say no gay votes and all votes explained well.
Dominator
Phoeniix
10 lines
i spit first
thas all the rules he said
but i just wanna say no gay votes and all votes explained well.
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
yo this bitch got shit switched, you the fuckin submissive
cuz u blow worse than whore-monica (harmonica) and on my dick like im Clinton
if you the leader, LS got a sad front...you just mad bluff
cuz the only dominating u do is when your boyfriends in hand cuffs
im the phoeniix, i prespire fire and deny gravity
you just learned to flow...wit ya brains spillin out ya nasal cavities
you aint nothin special, a dissapointing secret better left untold
cuz they grow emcees like you in mass quantity in fields at Humboldt
you fold easy like origami but u still fucking post often
Fag is pickin up his ghostwrit verse right now at the fucking post office
drop it now but dont take too long
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
check check
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His verses lack all sweetness so its not a suprise
That in one punch I leave phoenIIx with 2 black eyes *
Tryna flex his skills on me when he really lacks all brawn
Kid..... Ill beat you to death, ill leave ya paraGONE
Lack of talent is why your leading a crew that noone knows
Break ya knees so ya standin weaker than the flows you compose
Couldnt get worse if you highlighted ya verse and clicked delete
So he put a sun in his sig, so that he can say he brought heat
Your like a dirty Iraqi, talkin like ya tough but fail to be strategic
The way I just broke U in half ya shjould call ya crew PARAplegic
Explanations:
* Double meaning.... His record is 5-1 and after this loss it'll be 2 (and losses are in bold), and also the told II in the punch.
no contest.....................
punches-dom
wordplay-dom
structure-dom
flow-dom
opener-dom
closer-dom
vote-dominator
"I'm sorry, we've never met.. my name is driftwood. Thanks friend.. good lookin', I'll never see you again.." -Aesop Rock
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ooh shit nice drop there although it took like fucking all day...
punches- Dominator....nice worplay
personals...he fucked your crew up ...goes to Dominator..
opener- Dominator...that black II's thing was nice...
closer-...goes to phoeniix....nice link there and a good way to play off it..
flow- i gotta give this one to Dominator..
multis - goes to phoeniix....
vote overall goes to Dominator good battle....both y'all hit that up.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...88#post1000888
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
all day?..... it was 40 min from my checkin.... and I made a pizza for 20 min in between.... LMAO
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opener phoenix
closer tie
punches dom
personals dom
wordplay tie
overal dom
hit this up with honest vote please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...60#post1001060
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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this was close but the black eye line did it for me...
dom i see you are getting better man... keep it up dude
P was good though... he came better than i thought he would for some reason... he had some good personals but a couple i felt were forced though
but overall D had the better verse.... cant vote just my 2 cents
Emerge, how did his opener beat mine.... lmao... the clinton line compared to the black eyes.....
lol uppin
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it had some wordplay...wasn't great but it made me laugh
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DOMINTOR GOT MY VOTE! PLEASE VOTE ON MINE (TRUE*D V set-ignorance)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahah....
you have fire in your sig too homeboy.
its okay though.
well...falling into your own herbish fashion when you compolained about someone voting for my opener.......
the two II's thing is played
and for anybody who didnt get my Humboldt line......they grow mad HERB in humboldt...its in northern cali
yeah. nice verse tho dude. peace upppin
A h e U n c D e f I o r B w a L r d E
dude.... the verse isnt hate.... its a verse.... god..... people take getting merked so seriously.... lmao
uppin
UPPIN x 4
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