10min check in
no hate, nod/r, no crew shit
15min to spit
Aite? check it.
pilr1
Thoughts
10min check in
no hate, nod/r, no crew shit
15min to spit
Aite? check it.
check in you go first............................................. .....
aite...
piller number 1? why you call yourself dat?
dis shit gunna be fun, coz i'ma kill u ASAP
by spitten littin rhmes dat'll hit you everytime
heat so hot that it'll melt ya down, and form a single dime
then i'ma get you and i'ma flip you wit these punches that i throw
and when your spinnin in mid air it seemz like your goin' in slow-mo'
You see, you aint number 1, i'm tha shinin' sun
beamin down on you, my sound surrounds you when this shit has just begun.
Im'a finish this right here before you get yourself burnt red
and i'ma let you hava go at me, though i no your so dam dead.
im kill this man and ive barley gotten started
he calls him thoghts but hes mentaly retarted
im sorry i have to be so damn cold hearted
but toughs rymes smell like somone farted
please give it up for my dearly departed
i dont even know why he thought he could beat me
his lame ass hasn't even gone through puberty
come on man hes only 15 he can barly see his pe pe
hes probly still watchin kids play hous wit pe-we
call me john cena cause you cant see me
any constructive critisism would be great thanks..
yo we need some votes ya'll!
Thoughts: was an allright verse had sum funny punches that were personal.
pill: not a good verse. pretty good set ups but wen it came to the punch it was just sad
v///thoughts
HollyHood
Pilr1: too mothafukin basic, work on creativity and punches need to elevate (overall 1-10) i give it a 2.....
thoughts: ur verse was ok, attempted and accomplished punches were seen, good flow, kinda basic after all(overall 1-10) i give it a 5.........
vote thoughts
make sure u help out close this battle we need honest votes:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248038
shot thoughts that battle was prety tight, your punches could hav hit better and used a better vocab but otherwise you merked this fool
good on ya
v/// Thoughts
Buddha Blessed
uping....
upping..........
pilr's ish was too generic..thoughts got the upper hand on this battle..yall vote up on my battle against Pilr1.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248945
yo vote tis battle who eva and ill vote urs or ur other battlez
i need 3 more votes
uppin' yo.... we still need these votes in
Posting Rules
