Flim
Teddy
ok
ok im lookin for a battle
summet like 5 bars min
no d/r blah blah blah
must post by 2pm GMT UK today (time has changed to 5pm were ever this guy is) i will be posting by 2pm then watchin out for flims verse...
checkin in, i spit later but will be befroe 2pm
This guys a pedophile like the muppets in his sig/
Big bird plays with children and so does this kid/
Sesame street died years ago so should this fool/
Can of gas in my hand bitch your to be my fuel/
Like a fish on a hook this kid will be struggling/
While i take my words and just start juggling/
To string along setences like death for the kiddy fiddler/
Noose round his neck while he is dangling from some timber/
Axis bone snapped poor guys gone on time out/
Lifeless you hanging cos i caused you to flat line out/
sry its 9 minutes late i just back in (how come you cant edit your posts ive had to waste an upin lol for this) ok uppin your verse by 5pm-ish yeah?
Wow
Yo
itte
Few words get on my level..U couldn't shoot fire if u had a personal devil..
Leave yah brain collaspe override..Have"em switch aliases with no overtime..
Kill"em let"em swim ona single breath..talking bout strugging 2lines yah whole rep..
Smoke this kid like a Straight Blunt..Nigga u a teddy so i can divoure u like a runt..
U caught up N its pain time..Don't Be so Obsurded he Ghoust With RE-named lines.'
Im hot im hot on fire..This kids Whole work is based off my Lyrical aquire...
Imma lunch out on his mother..Now u lifeless cause 4 lines ate u with butter..
Its all a take of mind..Use"em then watch"em Sufficate in his own txt rhyme...
Let go of this innocent kid..have'em up on ebay for the person with the highest bid..
Da last verse how teddy was hit by my belt..I bet he won't B satisfied till he stock.N.Selfed
Very weak but i was in a rush to goto bed i was tired vote
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149620 heres a vote i did so please vote uppin the votes
uppin 1x
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uppin x2 com on this is getting slept on peeps pls vote...
uppin x3 come guys vote please to close this. all we nedd is peeps to vote!
Come on guys fuckin vote this shit need closing vote
aight i gotta go with teddy on this one,
he stays consistent and your flows are sick.
elmo needs work or whatever the fuck you are.
your not bad yourself though but gotta go wit teddy
VOTE: Teddy
v/teddy
his flow was better.. more punhes and wordplay
better vocublary
hit-it-up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=151002
ok thanks for the votes but can someone please break them sown tell us were we went wrong etc?? 5th n last uppin
ok lisen i dident realy feel any flow comin out of eather of you but teddy had some desent punches nd flim sorry bro but ur shit was so confusing i could bearly read it
you both need to work on structure teddy had good word play and vocab
flim up ur vocab nd both of you elavate
v/Teddy
v/teddy
he had more punches,flow,structure,and wordplay
other guy-hardly had anythang worth bein critiqued it was sad.he had no flow no wordplay and structure
v-teddy
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yo this is fear lookin out for any1 who wants to battle a tru spitta, im new but im betta then have the kidz that post on this joint, so sum1 let me know if they want to battle and how to and what to do cuz im lost so far
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