Nok V Strict

[pedro nok]

8 lines
No crew
Hate
Beef
D/R votes
U spit first, I spt 20 mins after

Drop Soon

[Strict]

You can't see me coz I'ma bout to destroy your field of vision/
I shoot wit precision, my target is you coz its time to kill the bitching/
8 lines, well good, you ain't worth any more than that/
your rhymes are wack, no contest for this verbal attack/
Its time to make your move but like manual cars you'll be stalling/
I'll have you begging for mercy on main roads so that people think you're KERB CRAWLING/
You ain't even close to my skill, you just an embarrassment/
you carry a "brush" so that when you hit the canvas, you can "draw" comparisons/

[pedro nok]

HA HA HA HA HA......Strict??????

Strict?...I’m gonna hurt this boy like corporal punishment
I’ll be “strict” bruv…And knock you out the RB establishment
Cos ya 2 wack for words … I can’t explain how it occurs
Cos I’ll bomb this newb like Osama did to them Turkish Kurds
Why Nok’d Vizion?...Named cos I knock Losers out the frame
Bring all ya game…Strict Loser Rappin get burned up in flames
We ain’t the same…Cos Nok comes equipt and is ill with skill
The Vizionary soldier sees the target Newb and it’s Kill, Kill, Kill

Breakdown :-

Turkish Kurdz and Osama Bin Laden Line - Bomb set off it Turkey, Killed many Turkz

Corporal Punishment - Strictness, beatdown

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Good battle...................................Lets see how the votin goes?

[Strict]

Yo lets get some votes


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^^^I did that to get to 100 characters

[pedro nok]

uppin............................................. ..........1st up..................................Get votin and it will be returned soon

[rule]

Noked took this flow was better had a more expanded vocab harder punches creative all in all a better opener and finisher for a better read Vote Nok

[pedro nok]

upppin 2................................................. ............all votes will be returned so vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[e.coli]

flow=nok
creativity=nok
punches=nok
personals=nok
enjoyment=nok

my vote=nok

hit this wit a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94948

[pedro nok]

uppi.............................................. .............................3


........................................what?

[Judge Judy]

yo i cant vote on this coz nok'd is ma boy but at least i can give feedback...
Nok'd-very nice flow..some punches hit real nice n ya a lot betta w/ ya structure the way it is now...overall-8/10

Strict-Once again you had a good flow..but ya punches never really did any damage..every line in text has to hit really..which means no room for set ups..overall-6.5/10

Props to both pz

[it's GQ]

Kind of one sided. Nok'd had stronger, more precise punches going, while Strict had nice punches, but could have been fliped better at times. Nice verses by both, keep it up.

Vote: Nok'd

[pedro nok]

uppin fo vote in this battle.........................votes will be returned......leave the thread n I will check ya shit out!!!!!

[Toner]

Yo Nok'd definately took this one...well it was against a newb......A damn good first verse to lay down..defo potential.

Vote Nok'd - struct, flow, punches stood out

[Toner]

Yo cos I spent tha time 2 vote I would be very gratefull if y'all could put an honest vote on mine and GioVane's battle........................http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show............Peace

[pedro nok]

uppin 5th...........................votes will be returned as I said........I have been returnin so holla at this!!!!!!!!!