Kritikal Damage vs. K Sweet

[Judge Judy]

10 Lines

Due in 30

Blind Spit

Whore.

[k sweet]

krytical thinks his pitiful lines will break me down
but shit ill pull outta my hat will take this round
only thing critical about the way that you rap
is i think you a mental patcient escaped on a relapse
i bet the only time you rhyme is online you swine
cause in real life you 25 waitin in the soup line
my rhymes practice acrobatics they make cats flip
ya rhymes practice absenece they never fuckin stick
you a 3rd rate rapper with no talent to back up
only time you'd make headlines is if you was struck with a mac truck

[Judge Judy]

My mommy tells me not to Eat Sweets, But fuck it, Your Down
Fuck lickin the Lolly, So I think I will just stick to Biting Around!
Damn Man, At Least Do Something, Im Eating You Like A Buffet
Cocky fag aint sweet, not even cereal would admit you special k
Im in a bad Mood Kid...Especially When i get soo Badly Dissed
Nah, I am walking all over this Bitch, So Consider 'K' Swissed
Dude, I make Headlines !...Like this one About to Be Released
I Actually Thought u Would Win, Till My Sarcasm Was Unleashed
But thank you for my win man, Ill Praise you and Kiss your Feet
And just for doing this, It really Makes me Believe that 'K's Sweet'

[Judge Judy]

Merked

[Pushac]

that was nice critical u came hard k came hard to but u had a lil bit more and u get the vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=185955

[k sweet]

no doubt still uppin for votes ova here good battle critical

[Rhythm Buster]

aight. lets get to the nitty gritty. sweet. not bad. good flow and all. punches were weak though. i only really saw one punch. keep workin on disses. u'll get there in time. elevate!
kritical. i saw sum nice things here. good flow. and sum nice punches specially peresonals. good job. keep elevatin.
v/ kritical. can't vote but he had more and harder punches.
return the favor. check my battle in sig.

[YoungHusla]

Kritkal won dis shit:

Sweet: Need to work on ur multis and wordplay
Kritikal: Nice flow and wordplay, liked how u used his name against him

rtf..

my v// Damage

[Judge Judy]

Uppin ill return alll favors !

[Knats]

yo i felt dat both came out strong with some hot punch lines but in the end Kritkal came through by staying strong from the jump.My vote would go to Kritkal.

[Judge Judy]

Uppin....Cmon people ill rtf

[Kairos]

K Sweet
krytical thinks his pitiful lines will break me down
but shit ill pull outta my hat will take this round
nah
only thing critical about the way that you rap
is i think you a mental patcient escaped on a relapse
ok, needed erewording
i bet the only time you rhyme is online you swine
cause in real life you 25 waitin in the soup line
not feeling it
my rhymes practice acrobatics they make cats flip
ya rhymes practice absenece they never fuckin stick
nah
you a 3rd rate rapper with no talent to back up
only time you'd make headlines is if you was struck with a mac truck
weak closer

vs.

Kritikal Damage
My mommy tells me not to Eat Sweets, But fuck it, Your Down
Fuck lickin the Lolly, So I think I will just stick to Biting Around!
ok
Damn Man, At Least Do Something, Im Eating You Like A Buffet
Cocky fag aint sweet, not even cereal would admit you special k
good
Im in a bad Mood Kid...Especially When i get soo Badly Dissed
Nah, I am walking all over this Bitch, So Consider 'K' Swissed
nice
Dude, I make Headlines !...Like this one About to Be Released
I Actually Thought u Would Win, Till My Sarcasm Was Unleashed
alright
But thank you for my win man, Ill Praise you and Kiss your Feet
And just for doing this, It really Makes me Believe that 'K's Sweet'
fine

v/Kritikal. He came at his opponent much better, with stronger punches, due to better set-ups. K Sweet had alright ideas, but they needed some rewording. He came at Kritikal with one bar, and it wan't that strong. Kritikal however, had good nameplay in nearly all his bars, creating strong punches. It is an easy win for how you came with personals at his name.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=173432

[Telekinetic]

K sweet...

krytical thinks his pitiful lines will break me down
but shit ill pull outta my hat will take this round
.......... nah
only thing critical about the way that you rap
is i think you a mental patcient escaped on a relapse
.......... nah
i bet the only time you rhyme is online you swine
cause in real life you 25 waitin in the soup line
......... nah
my rhymes practice acrobatics they make cats flip
ya rhymes practice absenece they never fuckin stick
......... nah
you a 3rd rate rapper with no talent to back up
only time you'd make headlines is if you was struck with a mac truck
........ nah

weak verse


Kritikal....
My mommy tells me not to Eat Sweets, But fuck it, Your Down
Fuck lickin the Lolly, So I think I will just stick to Biting Around!
..........nah
Damn Man, At Least Do Something, Im Eating You Like A Buffet
Cocky fag aint sweet, not even cereal would admit you special k
.......... decent but played
Im in a bad Mood Kid...Especially When i get soo Badly Dissed
Nah, I am walking all over this Bitch, So Consider 'K' Swissed
......... good, I liked this one
Dude, I make Headlines !...Like this one About to Be Released
I Actually Thought u Would Win, Till My Sarcasm Was Unleashed
......... nah
But thank you for my win man, Ill Praise you and Kiss your Feet
And just for doing this, It really Makes me Believe that 'K's Sweet'
......... nah

Ok verse, your getting there.


Overall...
V/Kritikal, much better verse
Keep at it, you got some good ideas at times.
Work on your personals. Read some shit in LLL.

[BLuNT]

krit... had a realllly shitty opener... but after about the 3rd line IE 4th line starting wit the special k punch... shit was hard the rest of the way through/... i was feelin the punches..

k sweet, man, you came like you have no clue what a punch line is... i mean i dno, you swing like my grandma.. haha.. flow was real generic, along wit the rest your content.. i jus dun think u came close

v/ Kritical or whatever