10-20 lines max
no crew votes
no d/r votes
blind spit
due by 10
no written verse
good luck
10-20 lines max
no crew votes
no d/r votes
blind spit
due by 10
no written verse
good luck
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
Czech 1-2
Dead'll shake the funny and rattle this clown down in a scrimmage
Here's a pair of concrete boots...to go wit that Watered down image
Look here, this kid's not even decent, he came wit no flow
The type to win ROOKIE OF THE YEAR...5 years in a row
U soft dawg...ya bitch ass the type the type to call the cops
Drop me? U should stay focused on tryin make ya balls drop
I'll whore this kid, and punch infinitely til just a Corpse is left
Then make you call me Oxygen......when u finish Short of Breath
But enough with the small talk, just spit and shut up herb
You can't come hard, not even your SIG's looking UP to your verse
Your rhymes are garbage, watch me stuff em and can it
It's like he wrote his verse on a Stone Tablet...
...Cuz people always take his wordz for Granite!
Matter of fact, that's it...a waste of time & another empty moment
VOTERS: DONT SLEEP ON THIS......
But Im'a take a nap, wake me up if you see my opponent
I went 16 g'luck
of da head
[/B]small punchlines not hurting me lil nigga honestly don't get big...
cause you couldn't beat me even if you had help from da niggaz in ya sig...
my hits,structure and wording hitting hard plus my crone is rite...
mutha fucka you couldn't get 2 votes even if you own dis site...
mental problems so when you die ya family goin bury you in a phsyco-grave..
i don't think you could spit hot even if you put ya saliver in a micro-wave ...
make cash dead serious dats why evil king payday-known...
you dominucan stop rapping go make some regga-ton...
my hits going hard threw ya flesh i know it feels like you gettin shank b...
ya quala ass belong in concerts making songs wit tego and daddy yankee...
goin feel like a taco customer when i'm done giving you all these shells...
madafact you goin feel like bob marley after i hand you all these L's....
neva say strong words in ya verse's all you be doing is poping shit...
best chance you got in gettin a vote is if dey switch da poll question opposite...[B]
eazy
didn't go hard couldn't really think i'm on da phone man neva mind fuck excuses
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
nice drop, yea I was talkin wit my ex when I dropped, but no excuses here either. 1st up, let's get some vote peoples
uppin 1
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
Dead Serious- when u started your verse it was wack, then u came with some punches then drop 2 wack again, u gotta stay focus, give good punches throw out if u wanna win battles. use better vocabs and be creative. also i don't like ur structure, fix that up man. Evil- u had a better verse. u was more direct with ur punches, and ur flow was good. u had better wordin and structure.
v/evil
on dat microwave line i meant couldn't
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
It's coo, cuz I dind't mean to write "the type the type" on my 5th line
Shoulda made the post count higher for the votes.
uppin 2
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
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If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
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If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
my vote is for evil king.....because he had slightly better punches.......dead u had good every thing just like evil....all u had to do was step up ur punches alittle and u had the win....
punches:evil king
strucure:tie
wordplay:neither
personals:tie
creativity:tie
v/evil king
evil king won this basically... he had better flow and had nice punches came stri=ong and i liked the verse..
dead had a nice verse but needed to work harder on the punches.. evil king hit the hardest at punches
vote/evil K
THE FAMILY.
thanks uppin 5.............................................
If actions speak louder than words I have nothing to prove.
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