10 lines
blind spit
no feeding
no swaying
no d/r's
no crews
no love/hate voting
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10 lines
blind spit
no feeding
no swaying
no d/r's
no crews
no love/hate voting
5 to check
45 to drop
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plz dont dickride just cuz he got more post then me....read everything and vote using this method
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GOOD
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NICE
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NO
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LOL
OR DONT VOTE AT ALL
yo i completely agree
any and all unexplained votes will be dq'd
this is my check
time starts now
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You must have shit on your mind constantly kid....whenever you think
Because everything i've seen you write i've Red Bull like energy drinks
came out thinking you good with a alphanumeric display
......................but your dick riders are dwindling away
cuz you could bring scrabble to the battle and still wouldn’t come with the Word Play
couldn’t win if you had integrated logistic support
cuz like midget prostitution........just by dropping that bull shit
you selling your self short............................................. .....
Try to get recognize but homie you aint even half that
but at lease you improve from not being notice to getting laughed at
Nice Drop Kid
LMAO. Dude.....that shit is wack to the max........................
^^^^and I mean that in a good way......................................
Im Tryin Not To Make Him Think His Verse Sucked
you aint a Lunatick* ....intead of pussy you stay choosin-dickOriginally Posted by Lunatick
fuck the crew-you-wit...you wont win...you'll either lose-or-quit
cuz you a bitch....callin me out...you must be fuckin-high
check this rednecks homepage...its a fishin n huntin-guide**
better luck next time....ya muthafukin lines-are-empty
ya rhymes-aint-catchy...couldnt get nice if you were friendly
you cry..."no dick-rides"...but you dont have a dick-to-ride
in fact...before this line...no one knew that Lunatick's-a-guy
cuz you come like a bitch...so now im breakin-you-off
ya first loss........."Order up".......on a plate-witta-fork
*his name
**his homepage in his profile
http://www.recdir.com/outdoors/hunti...nd_outfitters/
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You must have shit on your mind constantly kid....whenever you think
Because everything i've seen you write i've Red Bull like energy drinks
If worded better,wouldve been Dope...But Good.
couldn’t win if you had integrated logistic support
cuz like midget prostitution........just by dropping that bull shit
you selling your self short............................................. .....
^Played.
Try to get recognize but homie you aint even half that
but at lease you improve from not being notice to getting laughed at
^WELL,This was Good,but Not That Hard Hitting..But I'll Give you .5
overall it was a good drop,nice structure besides tha (.) being badly placed...Now On to the next verse.
Versus.
cuz you a bitch....callin me out...you must be fuckin-high
check this rednecks homepage...its a fishin n huntin-guide**
^lol.
you cry..."no dick-rides"...but you dont have a dick-to-ride
in fact...before this line...no one knew that Lunatick's-a-guy
^Aiight.
cuz you come like a bitch...so now im breakin-you-off
ya first loss........."Order up".......on a plate-witta-fork
^Str8,But Couldve had more spice 2 it.
Overall this was a well structured verse,flowed nice...Had sum really Basic punches,with sum okay multi's..But Still had punches that made laugh an sum that were effective..overall a good drop.
This was close.
V/=Word.Because He came a lil more catchy than Luna's.
Hit My Link up....Vote Honest.
hard choice to make i aint gon lie wordplay your verse was cray you got mad props from me and lunatick the same to you i would have to get back to yall on the vote when i choose the winner
go ahead nigga and bet on my death the only thing you betin on is the death of yourself.
k. eazy baby
why do you want me dead
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murdered mc's
wizzard
david porter
C.E.S
slang hughes
T-Time
hatingainthealty
spitz_shine
now who's next who want it with me
You must have shit on your mind constantly kid....whenever you think
Because everything i've seen you write i've Red Bull like energy drinks
*decent*
came out thinking you good with a alphanumeric display
......................but your dick riders are dwindling away
cuz you could bring scrabble to the battle and still wouldn’t come with the Word Play
*bad, doesnt flow well*
couldn’t win if you had integrated logistic support
cuz like midget prostitution........just by dropping that bull shit
you selling your self short............................................. .....
*funny and pretty good*
Try to get recognize but homie you aint even half that
but at lease you improve from not being notice to getting laughed at
*decent closing, kinda funny*
V.S.
you aint a Lunatick* ....intead of pussy you stay choosin-dick
fuck the crew-you-wit...you wont win...you'll either lose-or-quit
*haha great opening, love it*
cuz you a bitch....callin me out...you must be fuckin-high
check this rednecks homepage...its a fishin n huntin-guide**
*nice personal and punch*
better luck next time....ya muthafukin lines-are-empty
ya rhymes-aint-catchy...couldnt get nice if you were friendly
*okay punch, nothin special*
you cry..."no dick-rides"...but you dont have a dick-to-ride
in fact...before this line...no one knew that Lunatick's-a-guy
*haha best punch*
cuz you come like a bitch...so now im breakin-you-off
ya first loss........."Order up".......on a plate-witta-fork
*decent closing, nothing special though, coulda been better*
OVerall its going to wordplay for better punches, lines, and well wordplay and personals
V//WordPlay
i know lunatick he is not a red neck he is black i know that for a fact
go ahead nigga and bet on my death the only thing you betin on is the death of yourself.
k. eazy baby
why do you want me dead
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murdered mc's
wizzard
david porter
C.E.S
slang hughes
T-Time
hatingainthealty
spitz_shine
now who's next who want it with me
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