Rookie vs kwiksand

[Rookie]

yo dogg ive set it up
it better not be wrong dis time............
u no da rules.......
10 lines...........
ill spit 1st...........
all da best dawg.......................out

[: Venomm :]

Yo man ya only allowed 3 open battles,,,you have 4,,,ya gunna get disqualified

[Rookie]

ite yo yo,
ite here we hav a little man by da name of kwiksand,
ur a pussy u cant rap 4 shit ur better off in a BOY BAND!,
if ur muma new u ad turned out like dis she wud of had an abortion,
i dnt no how she puts up wid u.... ur rhymes and face are full of distaution,
ur about as quick as a gay guy gettin his hands on a bitches pussy,
u betta back da fuck away from me faggot before i fuck u up u wussy,
im gonna melt u wid my lyrics bitch like they did to vanilla ice,
ur like poppin a pill man u will get k.o'd it aint easy... uve gotta be precise,
ive just killed u bitch ur on ur way to thugs mansion like 2pac and B.I.G
wid only 10 lines dats enough i culd i cuda beat u wid fuckin 3,

done man ill see urs soon all the best dawg....................out

[Kwiksand]

checkin in.............................

[Kwiksand]

is it ok if i just go like 4 lines over??
ill post my 14 lines, and if ur not happy about that...then ill cut 4 out and we can tell the voters just to look at the one with 10 lines

[Kwiksand]

You really think its cool to huff paint and smoke weed?
Endin up with hallucinations and shitload of nosebleeds
Now I’m not gonna spit anything trite about ur girl or about your mama
And this verse is gonna deliver u a big blow, givin u mental trauma
When I rhyme, I free my spirits like im disembodied
I fuckin spit vulgar shit, some call my style bawdy
I can tell by ur pictures that u obsessed with ass and hash
If u try to make rappin a career, u gon end up with zero cash
Lacking talent, u always gonna be a Rookie, an amateur, and a novice
And if all rappers were rocks, ur so light we’d probably name u *Pumice*
And if I go with a boy band, I’ll probably go with ‘Nsync (sink),
Go back to the bar u depressed bitch and swallow another drink
Bitch don’t step near me cuz Kwiksand will sink you
Thought I’d be an easy target but now I just hoodwinked you




*Just to be safe and clear with everyone….pumice is a lava rock which is really light, but most of u probably know that…..im just trying to be safe*

[Kwiksand]

uppin 1........................ ....................... ............

[Kwiksand]

uppin #2.....yo rookie, u gotta up it some too, u know u can up 5 times

[Rookie]

uppin 4sum votes ppl...............................out

[Kwiksand]

uppin 3......come on ppl, we need some votes here .

[gun gripper]

Kwiksand Both Was Wack But I Choose
Kwiksand More Punchlines Then Rookie

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic

[Rookie]

common man im uppin for sum votes........................out

[Kwiksand]

uppin 4................................................. ........................we need votes............................................. ..........................................

[Kwiksand]

uppin 5................................votes needed

please vote ppl.................
thanks

[Rookie]

common is ppl gunna vote or wat uppin.........................out