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Busting through my window, bitch use-a-door me!//
Ill spit first, thinks Imma feed off him. Jealous cus his rhymes aint as good as mine.
To feed off you, I’d have to read your verse, and that’s a waste of time
This dude sucks, he’s on the bottom, he couldn’t beat anybody.
And I don’t think he’s gay, but he asks, “Why are all these dudes on top of me?”
Down there, he the only one around. Its time for him to grab a shovel.
Cus right now your ruling the ground……..like you only hit doubles. (ground rule double)
He thinks he’s tough, say he knocks down bridges and stuff.
Man, the pigs would of already moved, the way you huff and puff.
Imma call it a day, this is my last line, you cant beat me anyways
In a battle, Im the type to counter punch, your just the type to stray.
Busting through my window, bitch use-a-door me!//
yo vicious 620
Reading ur verse was no fun b
If i ate ur bitch out id still be hungry
Even when I get the runs B
I still be in its for the money
wtf???? can a mod clear this shit please???? lol LOL Im really laughing at this guy. lol
Busting through my window, bitch use-a-door me!//
actually leave RbGENOCIDEvICTIM's commment in here im using it in a battle against him. lol
Busting through my window, bitch use-a-door me!//
Well, hes now banned.
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ill drop sometime tonight (ill edit it in this post)
stop bitchin, its time to man up- This kids 'Toast' like a champagne cup..
i got hard punches, That'll make 'Vicious, circle' like dane cooks stand up.1
Claimin your big? pff Vicious getting 'drilled' like an oil rig..
ya luke warm, im 'bacon/baking' like a pig- i suggest comin harder then that lame ass worplay in your sig.2
me vs you? are rhymes cant be compared, everyone u verse, Vicious seems scared..
now battlin me? you've 'pulled the last straw' like Mc donalds was unprepared.3
shit, every punch he throws misses, you spit rhymes and the crowd hisses...
faggot, watch as 'I Lash/eyelash', his face like butterfly kisses.4
Watch JM Throw This Kid Far- Like your ahead of me in golf, ya not 'Up 2 Par'..
And Me Winnin? Please, Im 'Pass Doubt'(passed out) like a rough night at the bar.5
shit, every punch he throws misses, you spit rhymes and the crowd hisses...
faggot, watch as 'I Lash/eyelash', his face like butterfly kisses.4
vs
nothing
jay- that one line was one of the most creative lines ive seen in FL in a while it took the battle for you.
viscious- you didnt come hard at all no real punches connected work on your structure and flow and direct disses
v/jay
Thanks
Viscious620
Ill spit first, thinks Imma feed off him. Jealous cus his rhymes aint as good as mine.
To feed off you, I’d have to read your verse, and that’s a waste of time
OK get to the battle
This dude sucks, he’s on the bottom, he couldn’t beat anybody.
And I don’t think he’s gay, but he asks, “Why are all these dudes on top of me?”
OK Punchline
Down there, he the only one around. Its time for him to grab a shovel.
Cus right now your ruling the ground……..like you only hit doubles. (ground rule double)
OK Wordplay
He thinks he’s tough, say he knocks down bridges and stuff.
Man, the pigs would of already moved, the way you huff and puff.
Corny Punchline
Imma call it a day, this is my last line, you cant beat me anyways
In a battle, Im the type to counter punch, your just the type to stray.
Weak Closer
Jayemm
stop bitchin, its time to man up- This kids 'Toast' like a champagne cup..
i got hard punches, That'll make 'Vicious, circle' like dane cooks stand up.1
Nice Punchline
Claimin your big? pff Vicious getting 'drilled' like an oil rig..
ya luke warm, im 'bacon/baking' like a pig- i suggest comin harder then that lame ass worplay in your sig.2
Nice Wordplay and Personal
me vs you? are rhymes cant be compared, everyone u verse, Vicious seems scared..
now battlin me? you've 'pulled the last straw' like Mc donalds was unprepared.3
OK wordplay
shit, every punch he throws misses, you spit rhymes and the crowd hisses...
faggot, watch as 'I Lash/eyelash', his face like butterfly kisses.4
Well damn...ya shoulda said No Homo.
Watch JM Throw This Kid Far- Like your ahead of me in golf, ya not 'Up 2 Par'..
And Me Winnin? Please, Im 'Pass Doubt'(passed out) like a rough night at the bar.5
Very Forced Wordplay
Punches:Jay
Personals:Jay
Multis:None
Flow:Viscious
Closer:None, V's was weak, and Jay's was forced
Vote: Jayemm
Other than that Pass Doubt line, I was really feeling his verse, but you also need to work on your flow and stop stretching every single line.
Vicious, about that line with the feeding and what not, stop stalling and attack him
and make sure you're attempting to hit him line after line, if it's one bar that's connected instead of 2 different lines that's good too.
I also need vote in this battle:Big Miiike vs. TheInkredilbe(Click Here)
word. ^
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