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Microphone fiend
Jayemm
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Check...
...bump. *awaiting his check in*
didnt see this been waiting..check
you gonna drop 1st or shall I
I'll murder you and your talent your spits wont reach out to see a career
around here your rhymes are as straight as the floks that are queer..oh dear
someone get this fag a brand new set of punchlines..merry christmas
i'll let you bite a few rhymes in hopes of trying to win this
lemmie laugh my ass off this guys a whack emcee
i'll throw you an A for effort but your materials a D
your punchlines lack your criterias whack...
you couldnt beat me in a battle this hack's (jayemm) been patched
we both new to Rap Battles so lemmie snatch my 1st win off this newbie
your garbage like last nights leftovers is the difference between you and me
I'll Drop Tonight
alright
...ur wack, infacted its know wonder ya girl try's to swallow me,
Cuz 'microphone seems to suck' like you had bad quality..1
ill fucking crush you, i stop at nothing when it comes to murders,
cuz my flow, have you 'hanging off this board' like new surfers.2
Your a fuck up, i wish i could go back and slap ur mom,
cuz ur brain is 'No-Wear, In sight' like the eyes of a peeping tom.3
im on the move in this rap shit, i push forward and keep grindin,
As for you elevate? plz, he's 'vertically challenged' like rock climbing.4
thinkin you hot? well no one does, man you soft like pillows
im fucking him up watch his 'vibe-rate-tore' like broke dildo's.5
uppin^
...ur wack, infacted its know wonder ya girl try's to swallow me,
Cuz 'microphone seems to suck' like you had bad quality..1
vs
nothing
mic- you had decent flow and structure the punches were missing though. no personals were attempted and your verse was kinda played
Jay- you had the only real punch and personal in the battle although it wasn't a strong one. it was enough to get the win over none at all.
v/ Jay
please rtf with fair vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...vs-385486.html
Jay -
ill fucking crush you, i stop at nothing when it comes to murders,
cuz my flow, have you 'hanging off this board' like new surfers.2
Your a fuck up, i wish i could go back and slap ur mom,
cuz ur brain is 'No-Wear, In sight' like the eyes of a peeping tom.3
That was the highlight of your verse, the second bar was fire. the first was decent. The rest were kinda played n not with the same complexty.
Mic-
Your verse wasnt up to par. Concepts were played and your punches didnt hit hard at all. Really no quotables.
Vote - Jay
uppin^
Microphone Fiend-
I'll murder you and your talent your spits wont reach out to see a career
around here your rhymes are as straight as the floks that are queer..oh dear
funny and good multies.
someone get this fag a brand new set of punchlines..merry christmas
i'll let you bite a few rhymes in hopes of trying to win this
haha.
lemmie laugh my ass off this guys a whack emcee
i'll throw you an A for effort but your materials a D
nah...kinda soft.
your punchlines lack your criterias whack...
you couldnt beat me in a battle this hack's (jayemm) been patched
weak
we both new to Rap Battles so lemmie snatch my 1st win off this newbie
your garbage like last nights leftovers is the difference between you and me
okay
Vs.
Jayemm
...ur wack, infacted its know wonder ya girl try's to swallow me,
Cuz 'microphone seems to suck' like you had bad quality..1
nice wordplay man.
ill fucking crush you, i stop at nothing when it comes to murders,
cuz my flow, have you 'hanging off this board' like new surfers.2
okay punch.
Your a fuck up, i wish i could go back and slap ur mom,
cuz ur brain is 'No-Wear, In sight' like the eyes of a peeping tom.3
niceness.
im on the move in this rap shit, i push forward and keep grindin,
As for you elevate? plz, he's 'vertically challenged' like rock climbing.4
very dope punch.
thinkin you hot? well no one does, man you soft like pillows
im fucking him up watch his 'vibe-rate-tore' like broke dildo's.5
nice punch and wordplay.
V/ jayeem clearly had the better battle verse with much more complex punchlines.
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