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Thread: Just Rhymin feat .:FreemaN:. + .:k:.

  1. February 2nd, 2004, 05:57 PM #1
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    Just Rhymin feat .:FreemaN:. + .:k:.

    Verse order:
    -1- LM
    -2- .:FreemaN:.
    -3- .:k:.

    Enjoy....
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    September 2003, I came to destroy rb's dignity
    My punches are witty while my OM's are honesty
    Some people hassle me, off the net I'm the same
    I'm true to myself, my life is around this rap game
    I dont ever claim to be somethin I'm not, I aint fake
    I let out my soul in every single song that I make
    The icein on the cake is when people give me props
    But when I battle, thats when the penny really drops
    I will reach the top, there aint no disbelief no more
    Coz I will keep elevatin til I crumble, fall to the floor
    So from my core, I again spit these lines so swiftly
    But this time I brought .:FreemaN:.+.:k:. with me

    Leah
    This girl.. wow she is special.. my angel from above
    Touched my heart with her love...
    ... we go together like hand and glove
    At first a thought it was a dream, illusion of my mind
    Nice to know she is so kind...
    ... and that she will always be standing behind
    Its solid.. this relationship is designed for us
    And we built it together...
    ... from bricks of trust
    Damn girl.. You must be lucky.. To wake up to that reflection
    Your like my sexual injection...
    ... No need for viagra.. your a natural erection
    Im your destiny.. And you my future in the making
    For us to grow, sacrifices are taken...
    ... with no hesitation
    This time its real.. Ive found my darlin.. Leah
    In my opinion.. the best idea...
    ... is to always have my baby near

    “Damn you two….lm, free and K…we like that, gotta keep this coming”


    Elevating be-ond belief..your disbelief …has no pass on affect,
    Cause why should I give a fuck what you think…Im doing it for self-respect,
    That’s how rapping should be done…damn rite its good to be number one,
    But if you get there with no struggle..What the fuck you gota reflect on?
    Cats will act rough..front and stuff..and literally turn up the pace,
    But as it all boils down to it they aint tough..so why they bother in the 1st place?
    That’s why now a days..i just laugh when dawg’s say they wanna finnish me,
    Cause face it most of yall are wack and like vanilla shudn’t be in the industry,
    Cause im a lyrical teacher..a rhyming poet and preacher you gota listen to get-it,
    There’s many lessons to be learnt out there..so with an example im trying to set-it,
    I aint dissing anyone just ryhmeing..im not saying I come strapped to attack,
    And if I offend any herbs out there..FUCK YOU if you think k’s taking it back,
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  2. February 2nd, 2004, 06:42 PM #2
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    ayo peeps nice drop by all...........free and K urs was nice.....LM urs was nice but wasnt as strong as the others in my opinion.......just my opinion no hate nice drop by all
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  3. February 3rd, 2004, 06:10 AM #3
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    Ok.....uppin
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  4. February 3rd, 2004, 10:02 AM #4
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    yea ya all came nice, all the verses complimented eachother.

    Lm = really good flow as with all ya spits,
    thought you could of made it a bit more complex
    with more vocab or wordplay, but to be fair to
    you that is your style of spittin. still really good tho! 8/9 out of 10

    freeman = wow, flow,vocab,wordplay and topic,
    a great peice with an unusual style.
    thats something new i aint seen before . keep it up. 9/10

    K = you also had nice flow not as good as Lm but good.
    thought your vocab woz well executed, and ya also had
    some nice wordplay. 8/9 out of 10

    overall = all came very well, nice piece for instant. overall = 8/9 out of 10

    breakdown

    flow = Lm
    vocab=freeman
    wordplay=k
    lines=freeman

    fave line = Elevating be-ond belief..your disbelief …has no pass on affect,
    Cause why should I give a fuck what you think…Im doing it for self-respect,

    please return the favour and vote on the battle under my sig.
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  5. February 3rd, 2004, 11:08 AM #5
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    iight...

    Timeless... thanks for the feedback... much appreciated...

    uppin for Penskills... lol...

    pz

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  6. February 3rd, 2004, 11:58 AM #6
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    Yeah thanks for the breakdown.....uppin
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  7. February 3rd, 2004, 12:06 PM #7
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    this was very nice...I've always enjoyed LM's work..Freeman this was the first time I've read your OM and I must say I'm impressed..you had a very good flow going on along with your wordplay...k...your piece was also very nice..overall this was a very nice collab..I see too many collab's on here,which one verse is good and the next one comes in and ruins it..but on this all three of ya'll came very strong..nice work fellas...peace....
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  8. February 3rd, 2004, 12:07 PM #8
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    yo...the collab was strait fire, all o yall did ur thangs in ur verse n spit to ur fullest..no holdin back...my personal opinion..all o ur verses had no flaws, tho the structure did confuse me but i still felt the flow so it really didnt matta, keep doin ur thangs n hope to see more comin from all o yall
    drop sum feedback on mine->http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111845

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  9. February 3rd, 2004, 12:13 PM #9
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    that was some good shit overall from everybody. Free and K's structure threw me off a bit but the concepts made up for it because tehy all stayed on a certain subject and it all made sense. The best lines were the ones that K closed wit. nice drop yall and thanks for the input LM.
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  10. February 3rd, 2004, 12:18 PM #10
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    Quote Originally Posted by Penskills
    Freeman this was the first time I've read your OM and I must say I'm impressed..you had a very good flow going on along with your wordplay....
    Thanks man... Im gona start doing more OM... Im enjoying it at the moment... lol...

    Thanks for all the feedback people...

    Uppin a guess... lol... pz

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  11. February 3rd, 2004, 12:52 PM #11
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    ^werd Free Me 2 This Was Mine And Free's 1st Drop's..thx For The Feedback Keep It Cumin...........pz

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    ^............................thx.......pz

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  13. February 3rd, 2004, 04:37 PM #13
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    uppin...

    come on people... this is a hot collab...

    feedback is much appreciated... and we got some dope OM browsing the forum at the moment... so we should have some detailed opinions from you...

    thanks...

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    uppin again.....
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