10 Bars Max...
20 minute timit limit.....
Checkin and the time starts
Split-Eyez
Dominator
10 Bars Max...
20 minute timit limit.....
Checkin and the time starts
checkin in
be spittin in 20 mins
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Much too dangerous
Meet the perfect stranger
I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
The misguided angel with deep routed fears
My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins
You need to take note of your own sig because this is YOUR warning /
After I finish bustin out this verse your whole family will be mourning //
I will not only slit your eyes, you fucking herb I will slit your throat //
Runnin blood is the only flow youll have, thats pathetic what you wrote //
And ive only just begun, your losses are eleven and your only one win/
Do the game a favor and retire your mic and take up the damn violin //
Dawg you couldn't murder me if you traded the mic in for a machine gun //
And dawg youve battled 4X as much as me and I have 4 times as many won /
Shit man if I gave you some brass knucks you still couldn't throw a punch //
Its ok though you just saved me $5 in food, cuz I just ate you for LUNCH //
I spray the soul of ya text and piss on whatever that’s hovering cuz Split’s leaving ya lines out of order like blind men coloring/
So why ya grinin? If ya wonna smile then smile but the votes will shift ya face….Time fo all the kats to know that youz only droppin lines cuz ya too weak to lift the weights/
You couldn’t beat me if I layed my dick in ur hand and said grab this cuz Your words are fukin weak like Ja Rule’s ‘I’m real’ remix/
ill have you lookin like that fag rappin for pennys, the only way you could ever raise steaks is liftin T-bone platters at denny's/
Youz a groupie bitch whose condoms fit loosely… how you expect to show some muscle and push....if ya can hardly move me /
you could'nt "imitate" my text if i gave you my log-on-password, just one question…."..how many times do you want to get ya ass served?/
You might as well give in to ya feelings an adore-me..in battles you perform-poorly…,it's like your "corky" trying to play-porn star-in-a-orgy.../
Fukin herb, … youz being slaughtered! Even if this was a broken silence, I’d still be the loudest
This sissy’s Been-Grounded,… beaten and pounded,… have U Peeps 'Eva Found The Recipe For Wackness'?Cause This Weak-Slut's-Found-It!
Much too dangerous
Meet the perfect stranger
I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
The misguided angel with deep routed fears
My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins
UPPIN FO VOTES
no hate, but yo shit was weak
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Much too dangerous
Meet the perfect stranger
I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
The misguided angel with deep routed fears
My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins
Damn!
Really good battle here.
I'm very pleasantly surprised.
Kudos to both.
Seriously.
But someone's gotta lose and eventually everyone loses...
That's the case for Dominator, sorry, my man.
You took the personals and format, and flow.
But this cat got his second win (despite the stretched lines, stop that shit!!!) with harder punches, better wordplay, and nicer metas.
A couple of lines actually had me go, "Oh!"
Sneakily impressive, Split Eyez
Seriously, though...
Shorten ya lines, fast.
Peace
^^yo thanks fo honest uppin
appreciated
ill do sumthin bout the lines dawg
still uppin fo votesss
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Much too dangerous
Meet the perfect stranger
I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
The misguided angel with deep routed fears
My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins
yes this was a good battle...that fuckin strecthed line shit pissed me off..haha........
but anyway
personal-dominator
opener-Split-didnt really like it that much..but was more creative
closer-split-haha...sounded like an angry mahfucka
punches-dominator
consistency-tie
creativity-Split
structure-dominator
best line-dominator--4x line
enjoyment-tie
fuck man close battle............................................ .
everything was close but i give it to dominator for having best line........good shit by both
thanks.... uppin for more.... and split dont be hatin..... look @ your own shit b4 you judge...
"cuz Your words are fukin weak like Ja Rule’s ‘I’m real’ remix"
HAHAHHAHA.... lame...
whatever.... uppin tho
Uppin X 2222222222222222222222222222
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Dom your doin well.........bring this home for Revolution.............................
Peace!!!
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
nice battle
flow=split
creativitiy=dominator
structure=dominator
punches=tie...........
wordplay=dominator
my vote=dominator
holla
werd....
UPPIN X 3
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i like dominators flows n punches better...
no hate split but i liked doms better
i would vote but i cant
yall check out my last battle plzzz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...555#post871555
thanks
peace out