Killashea vs. Daillistrebel

[Essen]

8lines
No crew, hatin d/r votes
Due by 12:00 eastern time
Check in before u drop
5votes to win, 5-0 is a KO
ALL VOTES MUST BE EXPLAINED otherwise they will not be counted

This is my check in, hope u drop so0n. pz

[killashea]

iight man,im checkin now............................................... ......................................

[killashea]

hey fagget,y the hell u a rappa,u cant hack it/
u call yoself DaIllistRebel,U aint no fuckin rebel man,u'll look like a fruity pepple when im done with u./
Your icon shows u think ur a thug,u'll be stumped like a rug after my verse,u wont be able to thinka shit except to make fun a my nickname,shit,u probly think a rap as a game./
U wont win this,im a kill this,like i killed yo fatha./i filled your momma las night,damn shes loud,i thought i was at an opera(shes the fat lady),and the fat lady is about to sing so i gotta go n get ready to swing.
man i took it easy on u to

[killashea]

the last line wasnt part a the verse,vote for me................................................ .................................................. ..........

[Essen]

Lol u shouldn't have "taken it easy on me". W/e here we go, if you don't get the punches, don't vote:



You sayin I can't hack it, look at urself, about to be 0-2 with no skill...
Ur rhymes couldn't be "on the money" u were rappin, standin on a "$20 bill"...
You really thinkin u SLIK? No chance of "swimmin w/ this league" ur a "fish with no gills"...
Cause I'll force u "backwords" w/ one "L", I should thank you "4" uppin my "kils"(kills)...

(Little style switch comin to the end)

This fence, is too high to climb, now readin my verse ur a little tense...
Like a "hobo tryin to get a job", your punches "make no cents" (sense)...
Ur nothin but pretend, hittin you with words that hard for you to comprehend...
Compare this line to football, I'll leave u "runnin back" to square one by ending with a "tight end"...


EXPLANATIONS:

Kils is Slik spelled backwords. The "one L" refers to the one loss that he's about to have.

A Hobo can't make money, make "no cents"

In football, a running back and a tight end are two players on a football team.

Let's get some votes.....................

[Essen]

Uppppppppppin this.............................................. ...........................................(1)

[X_JohnnyWattz_X]

DIR ot this fo a better punches.......his disses was also tight...
Killa work on ur structure,disses,and punches..................

VoteIR

hit dis up honestly when u get 100 posts
http://rapbattles.com/forum/forumdis...p?s=&forumid=6

[Essen]

Iight thanx for votin uppin this.............................................. ............................(2)

[Essen]

Cmon ppl, don't sleep on this please, drop a link n I'll hit it up. Uppin...........................................(3 )

[killashea]

y the fuck isnt anybody voting?........................................... ...........................................

[And Death]

METAPHORES - DaIllistReBel
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - DaIllistReBel
STRUCTURE - DaIllistReBel
CREATIVITY - DaIllistReBel
PERSONALS - DaIllistReBel
OPENING - DaIllistReBel
CLOSING - DaIllistReBel
MULTIES - DaIllistReBel
FLOW - DaIllistReBel

OVERALL - DaIllistReBel

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=93392

[Rhymes]

yo the vote down

open D
Flow D
Multies D
Pounches D
Close D

overall vote Daillis


hit this up i took the time return the favour

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94913

peace

[High Class]

I will vote on this when you do one good favor for me. could you please go make a vote on my battle with lilthug87. The battle conection is in my Sig. aight. right after that I will vote in here for sure, aight homies.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

[Justin Kredible]

Vote=Dallis....................................... ...........................yo u shouldnt of took it easy Killa............................................. ......................

[Laureate]

Opener: rebel
Closer: rebel
Flow: Rebel
Structure: rebel
Personals: rebel
Punches: rebel
Win: rebel
Rebel took this easy. Work on ya structure Killa cause it throws ya whole verse off. Return the fav and vote honestly on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=94829