ight whore
10 Lines
Due in 30 Min
You Spit First, Since you gotta go to bed
Prepare to Die
ight whore
10 Lines
Due in 30 Min
You Spit First, Since you gotta go to bed
Prepare to Die
i think u should spit 1st coz u wanted the battle
Man fuck it let me ripped this fool dont matta man blind spit my checkin
aight then...yo Kritikal, i'll set up our battle
Brooklyn...Your Next !
I got 3 open asshole...Wait till one clears
fuck u, i knew u was a bitch...tell us wich battle is closest to closin and i'll go check it out
Al Capone ! OMG How Did You Come Back From The Dead? Kid You Shoulda Stayed
Ginny Gangstas Like Al Belong In Oceans, Afta The Funeral, Kats Setup A Masquerade
Ya Concepts is Played, And Your Shit is Runnin, Like u Quick To Be Taking A Exlax
Kids Gettin Sick Hearing My Verses, Its Like I Lyrically Posted A Patch Of Anthrax
Capones Gettin Smacks, Kids Thinkin Hes 'Pimpin' Cuz He Shoots People For a Living
And Homie, Only Time You Getting Thanks From RB Is When We Celebratin Thanksgivin
You Light Weight Lifting? Wow, Kid I Bench Press Lightweights Like You Every Day
Proofs Overwelming, Do I Need Any ?...Look At ur Name, Its Just Fuqqin........ Gay
Get it Okay ?....Chea Work On ya Shit Kid, Cuz everything Sucks, Like Rhyme Scheme
And Let me Info You In Buddy, NO ONE ON RB WILL EVER THINK DOPENESS OF ATEAM
Ok HEY!
Man furst of all look at his pic hes scared like tha guy from Home Alone/
I told this mothafucka kritikal cant not mess with da rhymin al capone/
Nigga u really want to make damage then i suggest u spit ur verse/
Cuz its horrible how u rap... never be good and it aint a curse/
this cat really is horrible dont kno how he won 16 battles or was he biting/
...nah i dont think so his rhymes is whack... kritikal must be dick riding/
now i want to go to sleep cuz if i see ur rhyme i may have a nightmare/
pussy i kill u plain and simple...midnightz or daylightz nigga i dont care/
what eva man lets take our battle 2 war,
and ill make sure that i make more critical damages then this pussy chump/
this battle aint even goin to be for "critics",
cuz after this kritikal bitch gets to war he runnin fasta than Forest Gump/
RUN BITCH RUN!!!!!!!!!!!!
ay playboy dont go no were for a sec. just listen to me free to see if im good enough for ya squad. give me a topicOriginally Posted by Kritikal Damage
oh yeah and ill report for talking about my verse
ahahahha bobs banned lmfao !
BITCH.....MOVE......BITCH.....MOVE......BITCH..... MOVE!!!
i would vote for Al Capone coz KD's was shithouse
Kritikal-hmmm...you had a nice verse!..personals were a lil off but your punches made up for that!...structure was good...i see you didnt even try against him!..multies were a couple..rhyminjg concept on point!!!...your punches were directed straight at his ass and connected dead on!...good verse!..overall hmmm....B+
Al Capone- hmmm i seen you had a couple of personals in oyur verse so thats a plus for you!...but unfortunately for you thats the only thing you beat him in..your punches werent HARD hitting dawg...your structure was ok...you should wolrk on making your punches CONNECT since i see you got PERSONALS down...but he did beat you...overall....C-
VERBAL INTERCOURSE
kd
pretty decent verse. your lines run on a bit, so your flow is off. putting "......." before "gay" doesnt make it less played or wack. this is a C verse. real weak compared to other shit from you. your lines are very average in wordplay and punches. the anthrax line was played, but enough to knock out this erb.
oh and by the way, find better competition. having an undefeated record, if you do still, means shit when u battle newbs and give them 30 minute time limits. coughprewrittercough.
capone
this is shit. honest. this is utter shit. elevate on your punches cuz these are simply horrible. elevate on your god damn wordplay. your wordplay makes me vomit. your first bar wreaks of self glorification and that makes me vomit. vomit vomit vomit. yea this is a D verse. elevate everything.
vote - kd
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