thug whyte Vs Young Cel

[Young Cel]

ight man

Thug is the type that suck kids, im the type that gets a vote before i even posted//
im hardkore spit flows that dont act, slashes like axe wit punchlines that will bruse ya kneecaps//
i spit flows to speck and dip, to slip when i be in the hood wit more cracks then chap lips//
im hot man i carry the heat, fallin asleep with vocab *to ill to speak*,wit damage to the body and crush ya feet//
behind the story, your mine is sorry and about to die, you get things twized like the cable guy//
you dont really want it the crew you cant have, i changed ya post in our crew sub, and that was to bad//
you didnt even let me know about the flow you spit, fe-male dogs dont bark loud like you bitch//
hot battle text man you anit it, and ya mouth is like a tolet bol
stay wit shit//
you come threw my hood in a honda acord, then my heat stay to your back like y spinal cord//
you hot now man, and you stacked yo, but my flows stay nasty like chewin tobacco//
you wanna see me dog, you check my streams, cause my flows stay fresh like oxy clean//
you the type i spit and only give you a taste, and spit some many punchlines, that ill bruse ya face//
you hot sike, you just want a crew, and in this battle i spit quick to leave you as a one hit wonder, and niggas be like WHO//

your turn man lets go

[Auspicious]

I aint gunna hate...nice. props to dat shit. But i dont go out witout a fight. . rap in its finest check dis . .

I strike a nerve, like a nervous impulse/
I was tested positive for lyrical cancer, your results came in false/Your gunna need a doctor of neurology and be solemnly following cuz your pains are bodily/
They hurt every minute then gradually slow to hourly, you all talk and your talk is cowardly/

I'm the most un-spoken and lyrical provaken emotion as if someone gave me potion to remain potent/
I've got you caught in my web, your the fly im the spider and your arachniphobic/
I'll pass the mic to you but you cant hold it/
you better grasp it, make a fist and tightly close it and never let go of it,cuz i see ure weakness and im gunna expose of it/

let me demonstrate, on how to hit you in your knee cap and ure head crepitate/
knock you over the head and still make you levitate/

I couldn't spit wit chu even if we had a prenuptual aggreement/
you speak from a women's perspective, you were probably made from ure mothers' seamen/
The message in your words are too thin for a meanin, it sounds like you swallowed em', spit em back and made em' balemic/

Ima incriminate you to incinerate you, choose ure death cuz either way I'm gunna eliminate you/
I already scheduled u an appointment, crack ure cranium and send u to the orthapedist/
u were born unstable, u should have been your mothers fedus/

Record 0-0 wit a name, Thug Whyte to be exact/
You spit against me like you've seen too many 8 mile tracks/
The evolution passed you by wit no way u can adapt/

He says he wants beef but hes a vegitarian/
I already dug 6 feet now all i gotta do is bury him/
I came back, lyrically fit/ Spittin sum lyrical miracle lyriacist shit/
I'm from the E-Streets and im proud to announce it/
I'd tell you the full name but you probably couldn't even pronounce it . . .end

Now all we need is the votes, get at us so we can put it to rest
- one

[©LipTiK~FleX]

imma vote on this battle once my battle is completed peep this ...

.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46311

[Young Cel]

man that shit was hot man, bu you really didnt talk about me at all man............................................... ............................................

[©LipTiK~FleX]

heres the breakdown..........

whyte vesre was nice he had nice vocab in it and some complex libnes flowed nicely overall was good.......

cel ya verse was also good flowed nice some punches stood out had a sense of simplisticness in it needed more vocab and better word play

vote - thug whyte

[Auspicious]

Thanks for votin...keep em' commin, this battle was nice. . so i wanna get sum votes on this and explainations as to why...Young Cel and Thug Whyte keepin it tru up in here. -one

[©LipTiK~FleX]

whyte hit up my battle in return.....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=46311

[Auspicious]

C'mon y'all we need sum votes so we can put this ish to rest. . help us out. . . .. . .. . ...... -one

[Ace Of Spades]

yo dogs, i can't officially vote
yet but if i could i'd
choose Whyte. you both
had good punches but
Whyte had a better flow
in return check out my battles
against BX Bomba and Killa Cobra
Peace^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

[MC KILLA-T]

thug white gets my vote for better punches and word play

(((((((((((((((((((((((MC KILLA-T)))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Auspicious]

thanks man, appreciate it but u never put in your vote. Make it official so we can put this battle to rest..thanks -one

[Criminal Intent]

young cell took this in my opinion he had some major ill shit in his battle

i spit flows to speck and dip, to slip when i be in the hood wit more cracks then chap lips//

you didnt even let me know about the flow you spit, fe-male dogs dont bark loud like you bitch//

you come threw my hood in a honda acord, then my heat stay to your back like y spinal cord//

you wanna see me dog, you check my streams, cause my flows stay fresh like oxy clean//

other comments
young cell i really think that u prewrote that but it was still a good battle verse overall. u should improve in your multis and originality. i think that you wouldve ko'ed this guy. Good verse overall

whyte i dont know what that was

I couldn't spit wit chu even if we had a prenuptual aggreement/

damn horrible line

I was tested positive for lyrical cancer, your results came in false/
nothin but a hot mess!

He says he wants beef but hes a vegitarian/

the most original line in ya battle and its still played!

The message in your words are too thin for a meanin, it sounds like you swallowed em', spit em back and made em' balemic/

that was the hottest shit in ya battle

othercomments
i can tell that u posted that up quickie so that u wouldnt get a no show but c'mon man at least try a lil harder dont just post up bull shit. u were weak in all aspects except for vocabulary kid. u really need to practice ya rhyme.


breakdown
cells verse

flow-excellent
wordplay-excellent
multis-poor
metas-average
punches-good
disses-good
vocabulary-average

overall 7/10

thugwhyte

flow-poor
wordplay-poor
vocabulary-ecxellent-
multis-average
metas-excellent
punches-average
disses-excellent

overall 4/10

vote-young cel

[Auspicious]

i gave it to young, we had a good battle, but c'mon man, not cool. I knew commin into it that it would be evenly matched but in no aspect would i have been KOed. . w/e man thats ure opinon i'll let you voice it . . -one

Keep Votin Ya'll

[Auspicious]

c'mon everyone...we need sum new posts. Lets put this ish to sleep... .................................................. ............................ -one

[Auspicious]

we need more vote, so we can put this shit to sleep, so vote .................................................. ...............................-one