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    Silver Arrow - Tip of Blood

    Its been awhile....but here ya go fiinally a new piece from spekz.

    Silver Tip of Blood
    By:Spekz

    A golden sun illuminates a profound day as a hunter waits
    deer skins draped over his flesh; face masked in war paints
    sitting tranced eyes shut;viewing a brisk morning by natures music
    to be one with it, a trible prayer wisps of the grown mans lips
    the land embraces his words; he stands slowly eyes remain closed
    suddenly they open a peircing show,as he grabs his bow and arrows
    Stepping forward seeming lost; he stops turns towards his shack.
    he walks in quietly to a dark misty room;kissing his dieing wife....
    ...saying "embrace life, i shall return back"

    Leaving her side ,he grabs a wooden case saying ancestory built it
    opening slowly a mystic glow surrounds an arrow with the silver tip.
    specially made for an occasion hes dreadfully facing; "lord,mourn this"
    steping on a wooden porch, he cries out a hunt,attacking the forest
    galloping over obstacles stabbing through dirt; his body remains alert
    begins to slow as though hes heard a noise; placing his ear to the earth
    raises his head to look only to repeat again; he then runs like the wind
    swiping bushes that grow deep before a merky swamp; he dives in.
    slow to rise from the depths,he barely surfaces eyes stare near land.
    time moves gracefully as a mystical creature marches; bow at hand
    pulls at the arrow trembling at the thought of killing a beautiful beast
    his wife flashes; then he pulls back the arrow at the painful memories

    Tears run a warriors face, walking out of a mystical forest wet & colder
    grunts in a stuggle towards his shack, caring a unicorn on his shoulders
    laying the creature on the ground,beginning to mourn the death of one
    shouting to the mother of nature,to forgive him of what he has done
    his eyes awake grabbing the arrow;pulling out blood on the silver tip.
    power of the silver captured the blood to make his wife healthy again

    blood dripping behind him, he rushes to a room were a soul had gone
    he pourd the unicorns blood of life off a zilver arrow apon blue lips...
    ...but just as he thought his wife already had passed on
    Last edited by Spekz.; September 10th, 2006 at 12:56 PM
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    Wow. I just read your Murder piece and then you dropped this one. All I can say is sick. The story is like a novel but you flowed like a genius. The quotes really enchaned the piece too. Really dope.

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    Thanx for leaving feed on both pieces..

    appreciate it greatly.

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    yo a really nice peace took me like 10 minutes to read it lol How longdid you work on this ???
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    ^^^Id say roughly an hour.

    Thanx for the fb.
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    Upping for some good feedback..

    keep it rolling
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    was liking the story telling aspect of this peice... good flow to as well i will keep looking for drops from you.. i checked out ur other one it was nice too... keep on writing. its good to see diversity in peoples writtens... good shit
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    I appreciate all your feedback...

    ..but id like some fb from more seasoned heads.

    Thank you.

    keep it coming.
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    Keep up silver arrow.
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