Bribeone<:Vs:>13th Disciple

[bribeone]

3-0,,,,(ko)
First to five wins,,,,,,,,
only poll votes count..Explained...
NO D/r , hatin shit,,,,,,

'bout 15-20 bars?.......

[bribeone]

Checkin in,,,,,,,

oh and both verses due in an hour,,,,,,,u spit first,one

[13th Disciple]

tight.....you need an hour? i'll be done in about 10 minutes....

[bribeone]

aight ill be up right after,,,

[13th Disciple]

..(13th Disciple accepts no Bribes)....

a lyrical duel now its time to verbally fence
my flows are 'adebisi' keepin your anal cavity tense
ladies and gents/rhymes explodin like a 'bouncy betty' bomb
spillin' blood redder than two cents

your rhymes are shitty so i wipe it wit my lyrical 'charmin'
beat on your 'skillz' like i'm joe jackson you're marlon

now watch as i cock my spiratical illmatic/have you rereadin'
deletin' exposin' my tactics/sendin' hollow point rhymes
explodin real drastic/register you for class for actin dramatic
faggot/tighten my clutch realizin' you bout had it

hopin' for death but disciple waitin at the end of the tunnel
once again rippin ya up like a disposable funnel

now i grip my verbal glock bash your dome wit my hits
orally deliverin' blows rappin askin me to quit/cut your
sorry azz banana rhymes causin this battle to split/don't spit/
like bubba gump i had to tuck in your lip

[bribeone]

You See my "bars" and u feelin "locked- up"./
"serving" u with a sentence" ,dont try an "bail "out... i know u nut -uff.//(not tuff)
from compulsive "jackin" u thinkin u a right hand "burglar"../
my impulsive shinin got your head no longer "square" its lookin"circular".//
u couldnt write "Blazin" text if u wuz a "Fireman" on a computer desk../
about to get your hopes-up... and dropped quicker than "Pepsi" did " Ludacris".//
i enjoy to watch youre pop-top-fizzle like a tea-pot when it gets -hot-u-whistle./
my words will bust bunkers and diminish anything like a missile..//
youll crumble like a pyramid of cards ..from me just breathing on you./
"fumble" your words when i "hit" you.. after "sacking" your girl and rhyme"blitz" u.//
wanna be "heard -n-seen" well go "yell-n-sing" witt a top-hat while doin back-flips./
gettin to the next level ?.......only by givin u piggy back lifts.//
"This-I-Pull"on many faggots who acting like U Disciple./
shove the Mic down your throat.... Shhhh!! not a word the Big-heads-in your mouths -full..//
if someone looks like a funnel its you, openin your big mouth lettin the greasy-shit-through./
13 just.bow-ya-head-down... be a good disciple-n-spread the word of what a Grizzly-hit-do.//

[bribeone]

good battle uppin for votes....

[13th Disciple]

good battle....

[MCrazed1100]

both had goood punchlines but ima ahve 2 give it 2 bribeone1
he had harder punches and a ryme technique good battle either way

vote-bribeone1

[whiterapper19]

Shit that was a tight battle but i think 13'th disciple took it

[MCrazed1100]

yop bribeone1 it wont lemme post a vote poll it sayz it si invaid or sum shit damn.... but yo dogg word u won

[bribeone]

uppin for votes,,,,,

[Conflict]

yo my votes for 13th disipline, he had better flow, i'm all about the flow

[bribeone]

ZzZzz need votes..

[Xplicit]

yeh both of yall was tight, but 13th took it cause he had tighter flow,

can u come vote on me vs. xtc, make sure to do it on the poll to please