u cant hate on this flow (4 da haters)

[Slimmey]

hey yo niggaz u cant hate on this flow/
u all wanna be da best but i'm king of this show/
rockin it on rapbattles dot com/
rockin it da same way i just rocked ur mom/
and this is goin out 2 all da dumb ass haters/
i dont like ya actually i hate ya's/
hating on flows cause its betta den yours/
or is it cause i'm from da street and ur jus all talk/
if i see haters by me they betta run away/
cause i'm hunting dem like lions hunt there prey/
there a endangered species just like da gay/
ya'll need jesus so get on ya knees and pray/
faggots ya'll could jus go suck on dicks/
while im fuckin ur mum callin her "nasty bitch"/

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word~perfect
dropz
born 2 kill

[Mistral]

This was ok....structure was ok, could use some work though in some parts of this.....try adding some multies to this though to make it better and some internals to it as well...flow was ok, it fell off at some points..but just keep at it.