Originally posted by ...::ËMËRGË::...
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Originally posted by ...::ËMËRGË::...
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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nice shit dawg
/\should be banned...reply with better feed you piece of fucking shit
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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this was a well structered piece had nice wordplay and some creative thoughts, the flow was alright i liked the topic...good read
you forgot to poll vote on my battle...can you hit it up weith it thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&pagenumber=3
Soft Focus
..Returns..
thanks...done
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Originally posted by ...::ËMËRGË::...
thanks...done
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Originally posted by ...::ËMËRGË::...
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Originally posted by SkiddZ
This was a very good piece, very well done.
upp muther fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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well I can't really say much for the topic it din't really grasp my interest as much as I thought it would but anyways. your flow was a lil bit choppy to me it seemed it was fell of juss a lil bit but nuttin big. you had good vocab and a really good structure and nice multi's and u had a good rhyme scheme and some decent wordplay. overall nice piece bro. keep up. peace.
<center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=red)>Atmosphere - inspirations of following in the footsteps of story tellin rhymes</table></center>
<center>Corrupted Visions</center>
<center><table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>Giving Sight A Third Eye</table></center>
Act One:
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Polished and refined to bring a new groove to crews/
gestures meaning lesser to negotiations between me and you/
so what’s this heartache all of a sudden edge’in to your seat/
fuck it, cement shoes and 200 feet oughta be pretty sweet/</table>
Words of Wisdom:
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color="blue"><table style=filter:GLOW(color=white)>it's perplexity set in a realism of our world/
it's textual content, stepping stones on broken pearls/
if wisdom is a need be vent for visualizing truth/
then let be proof, demise the break between adults and youth/</table>
u had nice multis and it flowed nicely
ur vocab was good and your structure
ok wordplay
keep droppin!
8.5/10
BEST OF YJ
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Watch Me
Eyez of a Young Nigga
Can't Forget yall
Luv sick
I can't Believe It(RIP Denise)
intresting and unusual thats what i like about it. keep it up
Cape Verde soldier:
Kills:4
Shot:1
Captured:Never
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vvvvvvvvvvvI Know All Your Info!vvvvvvvvvv
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your the worst fucka emcee ever...worst piece..
lol just playin
This was very good...Vocab was strong and the imagery was pretty good...best line
One last breath I take...as I inflate my chest...heaving
I blindly and wildly attack so fiercely...I aint believing
Good job dawg..
8/10.
Yeah this was a pretty good drop here i thought....your structure was good in this, like it always is....your vocab was good as well....Flow in this was alright, stayed on point through out it, kinda lost me at a few points though but nothing real big...You had some good multies....overall good drop....keep at it.
Flow wuz nice, Part of the verse didnt really fit the ending , decent wordplay, Keep spittin tho the flow wuz nice most of the way. thanks for the look.
Originally posted by Dez
Yeah this was a pretty good drop here i thought....your structure was good in this, like it always is....your vocab was good as well....Flow in this was alright, stayed on point through out it, kinda lost me at a few points though but nothing real big...You had some good multies....overall good drop....keep at it.
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