10-15 line max
no crew, hate or dr
no feeding
verse due hour after we both check in
check in first.
j-yo-b
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10-15 line max
no crew, hate or dr
no feeding
verse due hour after we both check in
check in first.
checkin' In...
verses due in an Hour...
Lets the best Emcee Win...
Honest votes only please....
lets do this mu'fukka...
aight yo
prepare to get merked, J understand? care to get served
cuz your interest in this rap games, just a tag on a shirt*
yu a fag for what it's worth, take it in the ass so gentle
your flows like fans on clearance, the way they blow special
hoe get a stencil, cuz son we kno you copying your rhymes
and could never shit on emcees, that's why you drop on a dime
hopefully you'll get better, being your new i don't sweat ya
from south of boston? now i kno where to call when-you need a stretcher*
this beating is obvious, and i won't make the hate staul
the truth is i defeated your looseleafs while playing planet 8-ball*
but stay strong, maybe you can battle a newbie next
and relay all your gay messages, through your fruity text
*in his profile his interests is the rap game
*he's from south of boston
*planet 8-ball is a pool game on uproar.com
peace g/l
i'll be back in ten minutes you better of posted, we had plenty of time. So hurry up and get your shit up.
Yo...
When I stop to Mock~you, you betta "Bounce" cuz my automatic creates "Statik To Stop~you"/1
thats how was and Will~Be, For Real~G you gotta be a "Handless Ghost" to "Not Feel~me"/2
Isn't that Right NO~ABUSE?, I show~a~Noose cuz I'm about to Hang this mu'fukka wit No~Excuse/3
cuz I want him Dilibratly~Dead, So I'm Shootin' SLugz that are "Hollow Tipped" like "Lady Liberty's~Head"/4*
Actually NOABUSE Fuck~the~Noose, cuz it's the Truth that I Can "Run Circles" around you like "Duck~Duck~Goose"/5
So pack ya bagz~and~Vacate, your "More than Weak" for being missing for "Seven Days" to be Toe Tagged~on~"Day~Eight"/6**
but thats your Fate~"Chess"~mate, I "Move strategically" around this place to Find the Safe with the Cake~for~CheckMate/7
Protect ya Chest~Plate? with what?~a~Vest?, J-yo just Slayed the Rest of who Contest... Man... What~a~Mess!/8
Never the Less this is Obviously~a~Massacre, I take this Rap Game "Serious" and Mu'fukka I'm "Honestly"~After~ya/9
I just "smoked you" like a "Dutch" and I'll Do~it~Again, Why Waste my Breath wit a mean Fifteen when I can Do~it~in~ten...10
* Explanations *
4*- Lady liberty is the Name of the Statue of Liberty and it's Hollow...
6**- 8 Days (Day~eight) is one day MORE than a WEEK (More~than~Weak) ... get it...
lets get some votes on this shit....
structure - abuse
opener - none
flow - abuse
enjoyment - abuse {just}
closer - j-yo-b
abuse.... how can u say that....
'but stay strong, maybe you can battle a newbie next
and relay all your gay messages, through your fruity text'
i'd say that ur record is newbie....11 losses cant mean nethin good can it?!?!!?
that was the only thing wrong wiv ur verse {really}.....
beat him in every category except closer....
vote = abuse
flow -
structure -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -
thats is how u Vote on this.... so Poeple Vote Correctly....
If you don't Vote Correctly From Now on then it Won't Count... Period....
I'll post it once again for the HARD HEADED:
flow -
structure -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -
^^^ thats the Catagories you Are SUpposed to VOTE ON... DO SO...
ive covered most of them in my vote neway so stop moanin kid
but he still took it....already polled neway so :P
no hate, good luck y'all
laterz
flow - j
structure -abuse
multis -abuse
punches -j
wordplay -j
Overall-j
Vote:J
Reason:i felt his verse more!!....his lines were more creative,n i feel da punch's were on point!!......soo he gets my vote!!
Hate if u want cuz I DONT GIVE FUCC!!
1-0 me since that last kid can't poll, well upping for some more votes. nice spit j-yo just late. i can't beleive you needed more then hour must be those long fuckin bars kid. let's get some more votes.
Dawg I spit 5 minutes past the deadline... Whoopie.... i hadtah do shit in the middle of the battle like make a Play.... u know... but anyway.... that shit counts....
if that doesnt count then your vote dont count Cuz he Didn't Follow the Fuckin' CAtagory Guidlines....
and i don't see how you could win tha Multi catagory.. i dont even think u had any... my whole shit was multis but anyway...
1-1... More Votes People...
ite
flow - no
structure -no
multis -no
punches -j
wordplay -j
overall = no.
close shit j work on your structure man............................................... ....no vote on my shit in my shig honest votes..........thx...........pz
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Personals- Abuse
Punches- Abuse
Multies- J-Yo
Flow- Abuse
Vocab- Abuse
Wordplay- Tie (Both were Decent)
Overall-Abuse
Synapsis- J-yo you need to shorten yer lines cause they were a lil stretched... Abuse took this rather easy almost... I wouldnt say one-sided tho... Good battle n return the favor and vote on my open battle... Pz
J-Yo-B
way better wordplay w/o the lines and ~'s
no abuse got abused, gotta add more punches and metas
that hit harder.
keep practicin but J-yo gotcha!
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