ok so I didnt forget the poll this time!!!
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Tonya~Montana
Relik
ok so I didnt forget the poll this time!!!
10 lines
check in
WordPerfect
Maybe later we can get to a little...
Little girl she can throw big punches;but will repeat the same Hit,
girl were not the Real World, please stop recycling what you spit,
basically.... you couldn't ever be one of the top ten best femcees,
Lady D has already proven that to you repetitively; consecutively,
you just try to Get By with low Quality you are Too Late like Kweli,
honestly for you to Beat me... I would become a King like Rodney,
your bars are as uneven as your eyebrows, well; your face is ok,
but hey; lets move onto your body now,ya didn't want to show it,
none would dare approach it?your body odors are that ferocious?
keep your legs closed,mouth shut,your like early morning halitosis.
why else would you think your so unnoticed!!!
WordPerfect
by the way, on the 5th line, Get By and Too Late are talib kweli songs, an Quality is one of his albums, just to make sure u get the idea
WordPerfect
drop any day now~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
WordPerfect
sorry 4 da delay
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like battlin a 'corpse' ya remains will be a "relic"....
you won't last "one round" like gettin killed in russian
roulette...
yea i murda cats, then outline in chalk ya 'figure'...
they'll find you in the 'basement' but not hangin wit
'tigger'...
i commend you on less losses, "ct reppin 203"...
goal is ten wins in a row, thank you for helpin me..
you hit with a few personals, like you work in
"human Resources"...
you should kill your "Ghostwriters' cause in ya verse
i see "forces"...
i'ma end ya wins at 12, being a rhyme reaper don't make
you nice...
ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit
"ice"...
nice drop ma let the votings begin~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
WordPerfect
alritght, this needs to be voted on and gotten over with
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WordPerfect
ok kids
breakdown
Relik
Little girl she can throw big punches;but will repeat the same Hit,
girl were not the Real World, please stop recycling what you spit,
^^no....bad opener
basically.... you couldn't ever be one of the top ten best femcees,
Lady D has already proven that to you repetitively; consecutively,
^^horrible...punch?
you just try to Get By with low Quality you are Too Late like Kweli,
honestly for you to Beat me... I would become a King like Rodney,
^^first line was nice....second blah
your bars are as uneven as your eyebrows, well; your face is ok,
but hey; lets move onto your body now,ya didn't want to show it,
^^flow poor....punch ok
none would dare approach it?your body odors are that ferocious?
keep your legs closed,mouth shut,your like early morning halitosis.
why else would you think your so unnoticed!!!
^lol...decent finisher
Tonya
like battlin a 'corpse' ya remains will be a "relic"....
you won't last "one round" like gettin killed in russian
roulette...
^^nice try at a play off his name but....no!!!!!lol....plus flow was off
yea i murda cats, then outline in chalk ya 'figure'...
they'll find you in the 'basement' but not hangin wit
'tigger'...
^blah...bad
i commend you on less losses, "ct reppin 203"...
goal is ten wins in a row, thank you for helpin me..
^^improving....
you hit with a few personals, like you work in
"human Resources"...
you should kill your "Ghostwriters' cause in ya verse
i see "forces"...
^^good...
i'ma end ya wins at 12, being a rhyme reaper don't make
you nice...
ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit
"ice"...
^^lmfao.....nice closer, won it for you
Overall=Weak battle, I expected MUCH more from both...but Tonya had some nice punches...but both of ya work on ya flow.
Vote=tonya
Go Red Wings
good battle here........
lemme breakdown shit.......
punches - tonya
flow - relik
metas - tonya
vocab/complexity - tie
personals/dissing - tie
opener - tie
closer tonya
structure - relik
overall - tonya......
hit this up honestly ppl........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=97258
iight yall...thanks for peepin this battle........
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thought id scope this battle out, i hate sleepers....
ok good battle from both sides, i went through it twice...i havent seen any of yall shit before its pretty good...
Relik, i think you held a nice structure all the way through..but i also think it was hittin hard but didnt really stand out that much...i think thats where tonya come through on you...
ya career is already on the "rocks" i just served it wit
"ice"...
thats ender from tonya dayum i thought that was really great...i saw some great punches in ya ryhmes and creativity which got through for the win on this...
relik you came hard...i like ya style...
nice battle props to both...
vote=tonya
can you plz drop a honest vote on my battle link below thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...1&pagenumber=1
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opener:Relik
closer:Tie
punches:Tonya
structure:Relik
vocab:Tie
wordplay:Tie
overall:Tonya
tonya only just won this one, wit a harder punch or two, good battle, nice read, keep it up y'all
aiight
peace
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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someone didnt poll??
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lol,youve seen one of my battles before lilem, i battled you before, i won i think 5-2 or somethin, back in the day, but word, i shud stick with topical, thats where i'm at, never liked these battles much, good battle tonya, bring it to IR if your missin a vote, much love ma
Last edited by Lord Sarcasm; December 9th, 2003 at 02:19 PM
WordPerfect
yea nice one relik...also you the first guy i battle
that did'nt use the same ole tired lines bout suckin
dick and hoe and bitch...
well uppin for more honest votes...
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