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    Who Can Compete

    ima smoke ma weed n hash
    n make u sniff the ashh
    ima fucka ya mama real hard n pull her hair out
    n when ya granmaz shittin ima pull tha fuckin toilet chair out
    ima make ya sis n ya gurl to lez shit on the couch
    n make um taste dog cum if they tryte say ouch
    so i b beaten up ya dad wit ya grandadz leg
    n make um makin him self fucked up cuz he gon b dead
    see where its led
    ima fuck ya wife have ya daughter n rape her on the bed
    calm it dont vomit if u gotta
    do it in ya grannyz pussy its hotta
    n whatboutcha your left
    them nigguhz gone pick u up cutcha up wen they do the theft
    read on fake ass pussy its sickniss
    tell ya gurl to peep thru the window cuz in ya sis is where ma dick is
    ma rymez cant b sicka than ya momz when she duzz people in church they done
    she bin doin it eversicne she was a lezbian nun
    the bitch said whatup cool ryma dope! n later said hun

    hit back whoze readin
    if u by the time iz breathin
    n yea if u a hater shut yo ass up
    or up ya ass ima stick the hash up
    Last edited by TUDOPE T; December 16th, 2013 at 08:41 PM
    recollec ya thots dont get cot up in tha mix cuz tha mediaz fulla dirty trix, ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME - 2PAC

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    You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get deleted..

    But this was ok.....your structure need some work though, try making the lines around the same length to make it structured well, cause you have some short lines and long lines....flow in this was ok, got off at points, try adding some multies and internals to help support the flow in this piece....your vocab was ok, could be up'd though....but overall this was ok...keep at it.

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    i think u talked about same shit over and over... and the same shit Masta C said!

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    Re: Who Can Compete

    delete this thread please.
    recollec ya thots dont get cot up in tha mix cuz tha mediaz fulla dirty trix, ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME - 2PAC

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    Re: Who Can Compete

    One decade later, you ask this? Business related?

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    Re: Who Can Compete

    lmao now EVERYone is gonna see this

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    Re: Who Can Compete

    lmao...
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    Re: Who Can Compete

    Quote Originally Posted by Dadiator View Post
    One decade later, you ask this? Business related?
    this..
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    Re: Who Can Compete

    after 10 years bro?

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    Re: Who Can Compete

    Lol he wants it deleted so someone delete it.

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