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  1. #1
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    "abc-slaughter''

    Alphabet, im actually attacking crews in an array of apathy//
    Battering boys with batteries basically because, they cant battle me//
    Casualties I create, contusioned and cremated casually//
    Damn dawg, this dark, demented, deranged man's dropping it drastically//
    Emphatically eclectic, electric epiphanies expressed elastically// Fallacies formatted for fighting, flickering with the fastest feet//
    Guys get grabbed, gagged, then gasp gruesomely, with the grappling force of gravity//
    Happily hacking heaps of hapless crews with heat, with hanus heads//
    I ignite like incense of infants, incredibly insane and instantaneous//
    Jesters jingle jangle best, jokers jump on the jurrassic jive//
    Kinetic keepsakes of kamikazes killed with knapsack knives//
    Ludicrous losers get lubricated lines of latitude, to lames lacking lives//
    A malicious mastermind making meticulous murderous mockeries//
    Napalm nectared nailfiles, a nervous necrophiliac suffering from neuropathy//
    Oftenly offering operations, im the oracle, so get off a me//
    Probably properly poppin these precised parlays of perfection//
    Quadratic qualifications, quite quickly released in quotations of questions//
    Resting, rapidly, rabidly, radioactively, to rip a man till ridicule//
    Sacrificing suckas the simple plan and to slice with scissor hands and syllables//
    Trashing in timberlands its typical, my tactics for when thunder lands//
    Unique ultimate uprisings get upset with uppercuts, understand?//
    Vulgar vampire, verbal vulture, a vocal volcano//
    Warriors wander wastelands, wavelengths wobble, walk away, WHOAH-//
    Xcommunicate foes with xtreme xcrement and x rays, yo//
    You young youths are yelping and yelling, and Im yawning//
    I am zirconium zeppelin, zig zagged zebra, Im Zeus, the z//

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    YOoOooOOoOooooooOOOoo.....I want some feed-BacC.....Let me Know how i did....Is it wacK dope Or what.....1

  3. #3
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    Show some Love and give me some feed-baCc...Be honest and sincere...If it was wack,tell me straight uP...and if it was DOpe,Then the same....Good looks...1

  4. #4
    SinfiC
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    I liked the use of words and the rhyme was tight but I couldn't follow the lines.... I ignite like incense of infants, incredibly insane and instantaneous//
    Jesters jingle jangle best, jokers jump on the jurrassic jive//
    Kinetic keepsakes of kamikazes killed with knapsack knives//

    i would love to hear some of this shit on audio tho, to hear what it sounds like, im sure it's hot...
    try to use other topics when u write your rhymes, and don't use too many words that sound alot alike....

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    Thanks Man.....Ur a good persOn Cus u'z was Honest.....Gimmie some more feed-Back......1

  6. #6
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    Aight man....No doubt,Thanks for the feed-BaCC.....Let me know what you think....be honest with me....1

  7. #7
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    i really liked this, i loved the idea, very original, good vocab and rhyme structure, 1 thing u need to work on is stay on an idea but this was peice was ill anyways
    hit my peice up called change of heart and mind
    Scytsophrenia

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