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2.No D/r Votes
3.6 bars
4.you know the rest
TECK NINE
redragon
Rules:
1.Crew votes allowed
2.No D/r Votes
3.6 bars
4.you know the rest
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u dropppin or wut............................................... .................
been like 40 minutes still no sighn
in Bitch slapped i sadi we gotta drop by tonite kido
..............................................Snif ff sniff...pussy?
Red is wut ill leave u swimmin in the way im spittin flames to ya head..
Have ya verse prewritten for a vet,How can u be a Mic killer when u only battle in text..
Ill have ya brains rattlyin down ya neck,
My punches are so Ill they Diagnosed u wit cancer..Ya Sexuality is like the 76ers witout Allen they aint got the answer..
my lines blaze herbs..the only way that you spit heat
is when you read my verse and my words and ya lips meet
I'ma do ya like Toni Braxton...make sure ya never "Breathe Again"
too late to reverse ya fate...a hearse is what ya leavin in
RedDragon receive a win...Do or Die couldn't "Picture This"
ya typed a 50 bar novel mac.. my 10'll leave ya scriptures ripped
U needa understand the personals an punches an metaphors...
hes takin dayz so hes typin a 50 bar novel..get it...Lol jk..
im jjust hella blazed.off sum bud...fromthe club...
Damn kid talk about takin dawyz....
dood its midnight over here...if you were in the same situation I am in right now you'd be too tired to write a 6 bar verse for some guy who can't wait.Just chillout i'll drop tommorow.Be a man and wait.
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for a fukin prewrit shit fuk that...u needa drop now..
its 1 o clok here nigga..u dont see me bitch an 6 bars is short..kiddo
drop now or get dqed.......................follow the rules
Originally posted by redragon
dood its midnight over here...if you were in the same situation I am in right now you'd be too tired to write a 6 bar verse for some guy who can't wait.Just chillout i'll drop tommorow.Be a man and wait.
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wow........sounds like a big fat vagina
You already put him one vote up in the poll dumbass^
But w/e I told you to be a man teck..but your over here bitching so I guess you coulden't handle being a man..
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(Start Time 7:06)
My Words Are Scornful..You Aren't A Homemade Bugle Boy So Stop Blowing Your Own Horn Bro//
My Text Make It Storm Hoe!..Overtake You Cause I'm Continuesly Fucking TeckNine Like Rewinding A Porno!/[1]
You Rhyming Is Mournfull.....Fact Is These Wack Kids,Think It's A Joke Till I "Applaude They Hats" And Clap Lids//
Bitch I Crack Wigs..TeckNine Got Enrolled In A Class With Aids Paitents,So He Could Be A Part Of Class Sicks!!/[2]
..Think About It,This Isn't A Nightmare It's A Fucking Fable//
TeckNine's Punches Are Soft 'Round Edges Like Unfished Tables/[3]
You's A Queef!!........Man Ur Done!!....I'll Put "Jungle Gyms" On Ya Spine To "Play Back"!!//
Get Slayed Jack!!........Not Near Me Cuz It's Like "Givin Perms To Mobsters" Cuz This Fags "Straight Wack"!!//[4]
Your Gunna Hate Gats!!......Like "Yogi With Heat" I "Bear Nines" Bastard!!//
You Wanna Compare Mines After??!!......Cuz Menace'll "Scalp Ya Forehead" And Have This Fool With A "HairLine Fracture"!!//[5]
You Dare Decline Tha Master??!!.......Dumb Fuck!!....You Only "Donate Sperm" Then Post A Reward For "Lost Kids//
Can't Define My Lo-Gix!!......Cuz I'll Kill This Kid And Leave Him With His "Head In Tha Dirt" Like An "Ostritch"!!!//[6]
(End Time,7:23)
..Now Uppin for Votes
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp #1
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LOl this kid puts in the start an end time like Its really true..u posted my boy yaverse that u orginally wrote last nite againt me an all u needed was one more line..then u saw my shit an rewrote ya whole thing..LOl
your gunna get DQED fag..thats just gay...
FAke ass Mc
this battle was good..almost like tha battle ov played lines..
well teck came nice...hella played lines but a couple of em' you tried to freak it another way..disses hit iight..punches did'nt really
have no spark tho..flow was good..nice opener
red came nice also..he had played lines also but he had a lil more heat...his opener was good...disses were betta..you edge on punches cause you change em up a lil bit..good battle overall tho
vote red...
^^SLut..if u cant read...rad had a ver up then he changed it cuz i came sum wut hard..an so he posteed that PRewrite shit..wut a fag....foreal...
^^^ya moms a slut!!!!^^^go jack off and drink it!!!!@teck
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OK but REd broke the TIMEl imite if u dont no how to read..
an trust me i no like a dozen guys that been all up in ya ..clit..
An i merked u..so hmmmmm your the slut...
Uppin 4 honest votes..>>>EVEN THO RED BROKE THE TIME LIMIT
opener-pak
closer-pak
punches-red
personals-pak
multis-red
originality-tie..both played
complexity-tie
enjoyment-red
structure-pak
creativity-pak
overall-hmmm...pretty close one.....but i go with red dragon....just harder hittin...no hate for real ...
yo teck...i know i voted against u here but can u please go poll in my battle with smoka
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