SS: Consider yourself lucky

[Rob D]

i replied to:
pot1ent - [Overgrown.]
ILLunatic - Tragedy Due To Hate
Deva - 'alternative' medicine

Consider yourself lucky


always complaining about circumstance.."if only i had another chance",
take a second glance...you got good finance & romance..what you wanna enhance?,
instead of whinging...think of the people that have nothing,
put your energy in to helping them..think of the happiness you'd bring,
on the streets..homeless people with just a sleeping bag for warmth,
having to retreat to the subway to gain shelter from the storm,
teenage mothers...with no family or friends to rely on for support,
having to resort to desperate measures for money..and still run short,
people with bleek prospects..yet are still more thankfull than you,
how?continues to perplex..havent got much..but they make do,
how would you cope..if roles were reversed.and circumstances different,
would you give up hope..swear you were cursed..call god a cunt?,
just remember this next time you feel mistreated to the 10th degree,
consider the fact...you should definitely..Consider yourself lucky

[pot1ent]

The imagery seemed pretty sound. .The flow at the beginning was great but went downhill from there. .No quotable. .It was just a generally good read. .But nothing great. .

Pz

[Ken Dawg]

Good stuff going on..keep on working and you will go somewhere..peace out

[Rob D]

up......drop links and ill get back to you

[Nefarious]

The flow at the beginning was great but went downhill from there.

Agreed. This had good message to it..

keep 'em commin.

holla one.

[Rob D]

Originally posted by Rob D
up......drop links and ill get back to you

[Formula]

Damn, I don't even want to sound repetitive. So I agree with what Potent and Nefarious said. Great messsage coming from this piece though. Good read.

-Formula.

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[Av1r3x]

serious flow...remind me of my style.Sh!t to make u think twice about stuff and not all about gun-bustin'.I especially liked:
-on the streets..homeless people with just a sleeping bag for warmth,
having to retreat to the subway to gain shelter from the storm,
teenage mothers...with no family or friends to rely on for support,
having to resort to desperate measures for money..and still run short,-

hott,soundz like sumthin I could collab with.Stay ^
-Avi

[Rob D]

^^^ yeah, if you wanna collab just pm me with details.....

[Rob D]

up....drop links