my rules
10 lines
you spit first
use your ups too even if your losin
and hurry up
HERBAL
junio sixnine
my rules
10 lines
you spit first
use your ups too even if your losin
and hurry up
ohh..............................and no crew, hate, or inapropriate votes that arent based on the skill of the lyricist..............
no ure wack im not ure an herb in not!
therfore rules have changed a lil bit
10 lines just to keep it short
no gay votes
blind spit u fag! drop by friday midnite
and that is it i guess oh wait
ofcourse my famous voting categories
and they will go as follows:
opener
closer
wordplay
punches
personals
creativity
originality
vocab
overal
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lol @ herbal, i like that u got love fo 2pac man, atleast sum mutha fucca in here appreciated the real rappers , dead or alive.............
Junio is redundant to speak, i harshly denigrate/
i renovate, ure skill all the while i exacerbate//
you cant relate, to me the way my vicious spit/
have u wishing shit, hoping u be me...switchin it//
shut ya lips, ill take my "nine" and melt yo "six"/
like R Kelly at disneyland...u woudln't "cell" no "tics"//*sell tickets*
much pain micro-size myself to infringe yo brain/
then manipulate you...into rapid weight gain//
then you'd be a heavy-weight, wit da "phatest" lyrics/
but this aint no sci-fi bitch, u aint gon come near it//
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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nice spit i'll vote when u done tight sig yo
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fuckin bitch no showing
what the fuck yo??????
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fuck herbal, ill get verbal, your humiliating yourself
the only sex you get, are from your pupils in jail
too many inhales...the herbs got your voice so crack-el-ing
that you become so pale, you could never be black again
in fact you choke so much...that it gets both of us sick...
tired of jackin off...so you choke on your own dick
your the joke with no real laughter, your a clown, bitch
and youll get smoked up by a real rapper, like tupacs cig in your sig
ill give u my compass...and have u lookin down south
and youll see my balls are like bad rhymes...cause theyr both in your mouth
opener: junio
closer: junio
wordplay: herbal
punches: Junio
personals: herbal
creativity: herbal
originality: Junio
vocab: herbal
really feelin the newbie's verse. good closer fo sho and tight punches. i think that herbal focused to much on complicated vocabulary in the beginning, made sense but just didnt hit as hard. i do that alot too, and so i respect it, i give alot of credit to multis and flow. i liked the punch about the heavyweight though that was ill. both of yall lacked in ur middle punches.
overal: close as fuck, newb u got close dawg. but herbal
no hate there junio, ur fuckin ill dawg
yo herbal hit this up honestly dawg. im not asking favors. only an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=90336
opener-herbal (least he rhymed his opener)
closer-junio (tite)
werdplay-herbal
punchs-junio (weak)
personal-herbal
creativity-junio
originality-junio
vocab-herbal
wut makes me vote for herbal is dat i thought junio came to simple on his rhymes...even tho I WAS feelin them. but Herbal got this.
HIT THIS BTTLE UP WIT A VOTE...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...546#post893546
damn........... alrite............ this is an up. this shit is fallin wayyyy behind.............aite.............
uppin # 1 kid i merked ure ass if anyone gives this fu punches or personals they are fukin crasy yo i had a 4 bar setup and killed him with the closer...you must not understand it if u give him the closer...AND his opener dont even rhyme
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Decent
Herbals Punches Got It Tho
Vote - Herbal
I Hit Ures Up .. Do The Same
Auspicious Merking Azazel
Artificial Intelligence.
herbal nigga u need to calm down...
i didnt try too hard, and with that shit, i hope u didnt either...
and my closer killed urs, please dont tell me your too stupid to understand my punches
junio sixnine closer did beat Herbals....but 1 good line doesnt make up for the other bad ones......
Junio foucs more on rhyming...then do punches....
Herbal = V
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