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  1. #1
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    Just Spittin..

    i know u not down wit satan but u a hell-of-a-turd,
    just an intelligent-nerd spittin irrelivent-words,
    u rip these people off.. pay the qauntity its like ya sellin-them-thirds,
    get in my face and get cut-up-jagged u just anotha-fagget,
    gettin protien from ya lova's-maggets that stick too pubes like magnets,
    you onna list.. ill rip u now and remove your existance,
    claim to 'walk the walk' but u cant even walk half the distance,
    ill flip scripts till ya heads spinned and leave a mental scar,
    ill leave u more fucked up then a JACKASS witta rental car,
    i got constant stability ya try n punch it but i save my knees,
    the good news is you passed a test but it was for h.i.v,
    we hear u spit, now we know where the fuckin wackness-at,
    bow your fuckin head in shame and never come back unless u practice-rap,

    peace.

  2. #2
    e.coli
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    that was a nice flow my nigga. i liked the punches but try and get just a lil more wordplay in your rhymes. overall this was a good drop........7/10

    holla

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    yeah i thought this was good on flow, but creativity was slightly lackin, it was good in some aspects, just nedded some wordplay and good metas...sumthin like that..aight....see ya!........
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