Mysterious Secrets Finally Revealed
What Was Quietly Concealed
The Release Could Be Tragic
The Release Could Unleash Magic
A Secret Chemical To Complete Chemistry
Newest Element To A Diverse Ministry
Simple Looks Yet So Complicated
The Anticipation Is Bitter Sweet Saturated
That Little Egg Holds Mini Prizes
Everybody Enjoys Those Kinder Surprises
nice use of words and a catchy flow
like that kind of structure in short drops
thought it worked well.....................Holla
keep it up........
good flow, nice structure i agree with ndeva bout the structure short and sweet...... big up..... PEEEAAACCCEEE
that was pretty damn good......i was feelin the structure.......short and to the point......the flow was on target throughtout the post......that was an ok topic......but that was nice overallll.....
peace.......
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