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    VERBAL MESSAIAH
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    Rushing to the catalyst of his death/ Man chooses money over a last breath/ The desire for opulence never subsides and the need for it increases in depth/ Children left alone to grow on a windowsill/ Their rebelliosness questioned when waters are expected to be still/ But there was never anyone to feed their soul or provide light for their growth/ Meanwhile their parents walk around soaked/ by the pressure to stay afloat on a nice ass boat/ not realizing that when death arrives, only love and memories depart with you/ So in ignorance, their kids swallow hard knots, not knowing how to chew.

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    As I walk down the row of giants
    I am a small pawn with zero clients
    Try to live payed
    But I feel like my path's been layed
    Everyone looks down on me
    It is easy to see
    Who the kings and queens of this earth be
    The ones with the most connections
    Rise up with success selection
    While I'm forced into resention
    A dead end job
    Stared down by a mob
    Of already made
    People who stay fat payed
    My future is played
    It's been done before
    Hell I won't lie I forgot to answer the door
    When oppurtinity knocked
    Know I've been forced away from the flock
    I run with the suitcase in hand
    Maybe I'll be recruited into the next band
    Of Mobsters
    Cops stop me and not those monsters
    I'm black with fury
    I'm quick to bury
    All those dreams that I told my mother about
    Unless I've got this suitcase she will continue to shout
    My little spawn
    Is forced to become a shadow of this same pawn
    I've become
    Where did the demons come from
    No way to get away
    I'm forced to stay
    In this day and age
    Turn the page
    The End

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    ^Hell of a first post, keep um dropping dawg.....I like the fact that you chose this thread to make your first post... Look forward to reading more....

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    Yo yall keep doin ya thing Holla!!!!!!!!

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    PURE PERFORMANCE

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    Can we get a new one up soon........puwease

    Hold up...hold up......hold up
    Amongst......Hussle and bussle
    I rustle and tussle....make my way
    Over cris-crossed pathways...
    In and out of doorways..closing
    Doors behind me...moving on
    Carrying on, pushing on...striving
    Chest out, full of pride...Diving
    head first into a lake...of diversity
    Adverse, converse......persevere
    Not all is clear...but clear enough
    to keep...costant...and stay tough















    ......But out of luck

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    Pretty interesting drops on here. I am very much glad that people are dropping here once in awhile (although this has slept on big time) I really think its enough to have some place where you can inspire others by posting your own perspectives and such. A lot of times i wonder if the limited time of a certain picture is enough so we could take one step ahead to another. As i look at this...i loved how the circular ideas cut in and out and made sense. But often times i think of the next picture im putting up...if it would be interesting or not. I know it would depend on the picture for the number of posts in here. There are certain pictures where you see it...cool things would easily get in and would help to write fast. I guess this is the time where you would say. "Shiz, need some help?"

    If you have a really interesting picture in your folders, just for a few exceptions, ((porn, explicit, nudity (although its considered an Art) or just pictures that arent necessary... I guess all of you should know that. )) or just something that you found while getting bored and having your ass asleep on the chair..im thinking this is the time to pm me. I would appreciate it. All suggestions are acceptable.

    I am very much proud to have all these people post their poems on here. They inspired me...and will continue to inspire me always.


    Good Job Guys!

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    come morning,
    and the bed is a fist
    squeezing out the last
    of dreams before
    the new day takes me
    into it’s own cruel grip
    and amidst this handling
    i shrug off
    this touch of death
    that has settled around me
    like forgotten feathers
    as i am passed
    from one dry handshake
    to another

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    no i am not schizo...or arent we all?

    VOICES

    i hear voices
    idle chatter from the bended head of a crazy girl
    lost in the tangled jungle of her own hair
    voices that crawl through small cracks of perceived safety
    whispering words that sometimes fit horizontally
    voices, that like a symphony of fellow undertakers
    try to reason with and touch my godly mystery

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    Y'know I've been looking at this peice.. and like... wow. I can't think of a damn thing, and so each peice I read I'm blown away with.

    Seriously. Everyone of you rock. I suck horribly for not being able to drop anything except pathetic feedback, but you all rock.

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