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    Write To This Picture VIII

    ..Dont you just love little pawns with briefcases? *sigh*

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    A World Corrupted, Bussiness Errupted & Theres a Loaner
    Monopolies Take Control, Searched In His Soul For Owners
    Who Will Help Him Survive, In The World Of Bussiness Lies
    People Buckle Under The Stress & Take Breaths and Sighs
    Inventions Invite, Youth Ideas Bring Lights To The Darkness
    As Money Is Bombarted, The Ship Of Wealth Is now Departed
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    ~Espionage Takes Flight~


    Espionage in the row of Kings
    Corruption the song of Queens
    Bishops bicker, while nights fill on liquor
    A mental challenge Rooks to Stallion
    Strategic battle through mindless prattle
    Valliant warriors clash in ancient saddles
    Wars rage while Day and Night engage
    Battlefield Row or Commander Columns
    Siege upon Castle or Siege upon Vassal
    A relic of Feudal System or insight to human wisdom
    Warriors tall in stature and free of fracture
    Stand behind a Roll of Pawns at morning dawn
    The battles near, hearts pump with fear
    Protect the Queen by any means for she is dear
    A splendid battle from Day to Night
    While all eyes watch the Powers that be
    A shadowy figure takes flight discrete and out of sight
    What carries he? A brief of clandestine sheets
    Intel, logistics, key positions, codes and admissions
    A Benedict Arnold with great precision
    Striking a deadly blow to his Division
    A traitor among his fellow man,
    A mole working for another plan
    A double agent for the King of Man?
    A dark force who seen the light of Day
    Bringing clarification to a Wars dismay
    A spy in the row of Kings, adding voice to the song of Queens
    For to life there is much more than means,
    Because Espionage goes further than just the Row of Kings….


    ~Espionage Takes Flight~

    Just soemthing that was on my mind at the time. Thanks Shiznit for the pic, it hit right on topic. I had these thoguhts floating around then I checked out the new pic. This is what flowed out onto the screen... Much respect to all, I'm back for a while....
    Last edited by Bounce; October 10th, 2003 at 05:26 PM

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    a world of tall and a world In short..
    the latest prejudize i am to report..
    off to hurry in society he's ay aloss-
    giving nothing a second glance but a single toss-
    rushing his life hes gone astray..
    lost his religion and his chance at PREY..
    forgiven for the time he took-
    perhaps the lord will give this pawn another look-


    eh? hard to work with

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    isolated when worlds apart, yet i find a reason to try /
    eye for an eye simply make the whole world go blind /
    it be a sign of times in which rhymes elevate the mind /
    struggle just to get by honeslty, amongist white crime /
    faces n lives become logos n pictures shown for status /
    with the weight of the world on my shoulders like atlas /
    the greek god broke his ankle so the world sits on a axis /
    used to belive liberity was civil b4 corprate scare tactics /
    considered a black sheep amongist these ivory towers /
    understand the belif in one self be to me lively power /





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    He Was A Pawn Star, A Vouyerist Attraction Of Business..
    Sold Out Only To His Own Manufacturer From Christmas..
    Told To Go And Think Outside The Square You Live In..
    Which Saw Him Take To Action Of Escaping The Boxed Feelin..
    Provided For Kings And Queens, A Ceremonial Attribute..
    Yet Unknown To The Knights, The Pawn Had Their Loot..
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    Haunted with the struggles of life gotta earn a livin' to feed his kids n his wife/
    All he could do is jus reach straight for the knife because of things at work that cause pain n strife//
    The whole world seems to be takin more than givin' he asks himself what is the point of livin'/
    He understands n realizes that it's all unforgivin' but then he comes up with no real reasons for livin'//
    He feels so demoted n underprieciated 'cuz of the fact he aint liked he's jus purely hated/
    On top of that the poor guy feels descriminated then only to be told his contract was terminated//
    He didn't rant or rave, scream or shout he didn't understand what this shit was about/
    Then he went home his job was without he had a thought in his head he went with it no doubt//
    Scared of what his wife would say something he'd dread because now he cant afford to get a loaf of bread/
    He took out a gun from the drawer n placed to his head fired the bullet into his brain this poor pawn is dead//
    Fuck a Sig!

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    Life is like a game of chess
    nothing more, nothing less
    Mr pawn is making his move with finesse
    trying to get by higher power is his quest.
    A new white man gets appointed to power
    while the blacks struggle by the hour
    to get to the top of lifes tower.
    he has snatched the briefcase
    in the race to a neutrual place
    strategically trying to leave no trace
    moving stealthily with grace.
    If he gets captured then off with his head he shall face.
    No turning back for thats against the rules
    but he is often mistaken for a fool.
    Only moving Up, Not down
    if he makes it to the top, he shall be crowned.
    So in life you must choose to make the right moves
    for mistakes are there for you to improve.
    Aim for the top no matter how low you are
    sky is the limit, only you can determine how far
    you can go from reaching the stars
    so choose your moves with care
    for lifes pieces are out there to get you
    beware
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    Keep it Real

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    That's such a dope picture, shiznit.

    Some very nice pieces so far. Especially magnitude's and bounce's. Sharp, flowing and on the edge...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    There are some really good pieces in here. I think the picture hit everyone in a manner that allowed thoughts to pour onto the screen. Everyone who contributed did well at expressing what the picture made them feel. Nice pic, and very nice pieces, I keep comming back to read everyones drop.

    This pic deserves more responses, so let's keep them dropping...

    Hey V, it's been a while, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work, I just need to find the time between my life and career to get back on RB. I'll be back to my old active status once things simmer down in the world arena, peace out to all you on RB...

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    He's just trying to make ends meet
    Doesn't want to wind up on the street
    Seems like all he does is compete
    In the end, bairly has nothing to eat
    He won't survive
    But yet he strives with passion and honor
    Everyday just to make a few dollars
    Fingers type till they bleed from past blisters
    Surrounded by managers and supervisers
    He won't survive
    But he would raither try than just die
    Around high authority he feels small
    Hectic work stations make him want to cry
    But he's still determined to give it his all
    He won't survive
    But no matter then pain or pressure
    If somethings not good he'll make it better
    Ones with seniority don't disrespect him either
    Its evident he works harder than his co-workers
    He did survive ...........

    ......... and got a raise.

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    This is racist
    White men stand around the poor black pawn in
    this groutesque game
    Is simply stated as "I'm bigger... better..."
    Than me? HELL NAW
    Off my arm if you're so brave, little man
    I think you best think nonsubliminal thoughts
    WILL be had by my crew and I
    Have decided that you shall now die
    Mother f****r, die
    Or face thyne devine wrath
    Was had by mah kind for too many years
    Can make too many tears
    Are just water... so wut have thee now? Nothing? Duh
    George, I dunno, what
    Ever I give you
    Never will control me
    Will too, you WHITE HORSE of tha white house
    Is too white
    men walked into a bar; tha 3rd one ducked
    Up man made the middle finger... so? It's JUST A FINGER,
    for God's sake
    Don't kill for fun OR to be just
    GET ALONG.


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    I know this is a second piece

    he feels slayed n betrayed by a dog eat dog earth
    he aint recognized for what he's worth at his birth
    no one feels his pain or sorrow
    he honestly tries to get through today and tomorrow
    Last edited by Kobra; November 6th, 2003 at 09:00 PM
    Fuck a Sig!

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    Amongst all the well established companies, this one stuggles to keep going
    Held down by hard working and honest values, it's end is showing
    Bigger ones laugh and scoff at it's methods of work
    While taking it's customers or anything they can to make it hurt
    Keeping it's head high, the small company trudges forward
    Walking straight by the others, having no grudges toward

    Dammit! I thought that was a good way to write about the picture but too bad I wrote it horrible. Different from the others but not nearly as good. I'll try again later. Good job to the others, by the way. I liked reading them.

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