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    ...The definition of my thoughts...

    Im confused between the interlude of earths rooms
    Confused between reality and illusion's worst moves
    Boxing match, Toxic attacks against the illusionist
    Sniffing coke on piano notes, smell the music
    Red Queen running feet, my destiny is beneath me
    I walk through seas and swim deep beneath concrete
    Escape from clock prison, im running outta time
    Religion on crop fields, I follow the farmers signs
    Hold brains above coffins, im thinking outside the box
    Im frozen between the sun's orbit forces blind equinox
    My physical frame is restrained in the spheres corner
    Mystical shape size shifting titan lifting light morpher
    Running the backdoors, Im trying to grab the endless corriders
    But my senses fall, through every door opened to its lure
    Whats the point, we're all chased by the grim reaper
    If I cant step in the immortals portal, you cant either
    People of today, just run around on the governments square
    People of today, dont think at first, and get hurt, all peared
    The worlds gone pear shaped, we all living in a fruit bowl
    Our questions get answered in question untill we get old
    And sitting here I wonder, on a day, nice summer
    What will this exact location be in the far future




    "And the place they call there blessings, and the place they call all sufferings, and the storys of them placed in, is placed in the mind to be placed into bondage - ????? "

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    i hate to doing this.

    please reply a decent reply

  3. #3
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    uppin this

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    this is some poem man but
    sniffing coke on a piano can u smell the music
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    ^^^gay^^^

    i hate one liners replies.

    CAMARAC

    sort this geek out, he constantly does one liners

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    dip u wack ad mit it now
    me & mewreckall are now yeah

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    your getting banned

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    I guess I'm the only one so far that can appreciate a good piece lol. That was deep. You had good structure, and it flowed nicely I think. You have good wordplay. "Hold brains above coffins, im thinking outside the box" that was sick! I liked that line the best. All in all, it was a good solid piece. Keep it up.
    we are what we are, what we never think we are.

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    thanx for the decent reply, still upping for this

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    please stop sleeping on this.

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