CarsonJet - v - White-Virus

CarsonJet-2k4 · September 24th, 2003, 08:19 PM

10 lines.....5 barz
30 minute max
Blind Spit-jus drop in 30
no hate
no dik
no crew
no recycle
no bite
no feed

CarsonJet-2k4 · September 24th, 2003, 08:19 PM

checked in...........................................
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**White-Virus** · September 24th, 2003, 08:22 PM

CHECKIN IN................................................ .................................................. ..............

**Lyrikally-Insane** · September 24th, 2003, 08:30 PM

ahhahahah carson man ...your abck huh wut ahpen to battlyn like 100 odd battles an uwanted to retir your back huh..well i wanna get a shot at u..an so does my buddy...wehn u doen ill set a clena abttle.up if udown

**White-Virus** · September 24th, 2003, 08:33 PM

Imma bout to de"jet" this "Carson" and leave him before his "time"// (before 2k4)
You a "cop", hell betta call ya Sheriff tha way ya "steal" tha "rhymes"//
Committin these "crimes", hell you aint dinner you only a lunch//
Even if you trained wit "Tyson" you still wouldn't pack a "punch//
Bitch livin "Daily", so you behind, betta "speed" up "Car"son//
Imma rap salesman, leavin you 2 votes ahead, just for tha bargain//
Betta say ya "sorry mr. virus", before i make ya a "outkast"//
Ya flow stays slow, ya rhymes couldn't be "phat" if they wuz on "slimfast"//
I'll leave ya in Reincarnation, you in World War 3 wit outta jet//
You in shape?, i'm not, but this battle for me, no need to break a swet//

lmao....aight letz roll

CarsonJet-2k4 · September 24th, 2003, 08:37 PM

White-Virus

Yo chek it...

He's a White'Virus/ Watch Out...
His Lines'Put peeps ta sleep like Linus-(charlie brown)

Can't Figure Why u even Cheked'IN aint even gon'moistn my pallet-
I disable Dis Germ wit Childrens'advil tablets'

Look...He thinks he's adlibb-
please....

Im too hot'Can't mess wit me'wanna feel?lemme Drop a few Degrees'-
lets burn em knees'cus das'the only way u front wit C's-

lil 15 yearold junior mint'aint even got a whip ta tint'
i leave ya like vick..de'feet'd an strung up in splint-
bitch get the hint, dis cats Pre'writs are more like lint'

wasted cash flow spent'my time has been wasted'on a hopless baby shady'
more like boby brady gettin played' by his sis miss Marsha ...daily-

CarsonJet-2k4 · September 24th, 2003, 08:44 PM

hmmmmm................lets get sum votes runnin
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Alchemy · September 24th, 2003, 09:05 PM

Punches:Carson
Flow:White
Personals:White
Structure:Both
Vocab:Carson
Opener:Carson
Closer:Carson
Wordplay:Both

Overal:Carson

This was a pretty good battle. I liked both MC's verses and they both hit pretty hard. I was feelin carson mroe though, his shit was good. White nice stuff, keep it up and keep elevating. Props to both MC's.

Hit this up for me:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=80975

AbOmInAtIoN · September 24th, 2003, 09:16 PM

i dunno about dis one man.............its a hard one..............i think imma have ta go wit...............white virus...........dunno man.........i was just feelin his one more than the other kats one
=> white virus

AbOmInAtIoN · September 24th, 2003, 09:19 PM

a yo any of yall wanna battle n shit.......................if any yall wanna jus pm me first man............then we can set some shit up and get it goin.......holla at ya boi

**Born To Kill** · September 25th, 2003, 10:20 AM

Good battle...

Nice rhymes on both sides.

Still kinda one sided.

I believe Virus came ok, just didn't bring the complexity, the wordplay, or the punches that Carson did.
Plus, one thing I really like is imagery.
Carson outdid him there too.
I laughed imagining a "baby shady" and "bobby gettin jumped by marsha"...
That shit was funny.

I'll give Virus the flow, but Carson took the rest quite handily.

Holla

Born vs. Sauce

CarsonJet-2k4 · September 25th, 2003, 11:45 AM

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Pale Horse · September 25th, 2003, 12:13 PM

Originally posted by Born To Kill

I believe Virus came ok, just didn't bring the complexity, the wordplay, or the punches that Carson did.
Born vs. Sauce

I belive that both emcees came wit it but carson wuz on another level wit his junk. Virus you did good man you just went up against someone else thats really good also.

Vote Carson because of complexity and wordplay.