CarsonJet -v- Steelfist

[CarsonJet-2k4]

10 lines - 5 bars
30 minutes max-
Blind Spits (drop when ur done)
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding
No Hate Votes
No "Ima vote him cus he got 100 posts" Votes
No Crew Votes

[Steelfist]

aiight checking in................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ................................

[CarsonJet-2k4]

Steelfist?...More like Rubber'wrist From Rubb'n 20 Diks'fo Them 4 Vics-
Shit...I could Give 4 free licks' An Still I defeat ya Cheap Tactics-

'Ya Ryhmes of lines Like Bobbet's Man-kind'dey simply Missin-
Wit all Ya Bitchen ya Think ya Work'in in Kithens-

Bitch' stop dat Hissin'n listen ta how ya dissin'-
My Verbs Fill ya head wit lead..only way ya mind B' Christened'-

I drop ya Down wit Tek 9's?Naw its a Textual war-
I hit up equivalent of a Sprint tone to a bethoven Score'-

Can't fuk wit me...I send U an Lee runnin up em rocks in bak ya see?
Bent ova knee' Its the Carson creed,I eat ya up like Caucasian feed-

[Steelfist]

WATCH ME ARAING YOUR BRAIN... TILL MY ILLNESS PAINS YOUR VEINS
YOU'VE SUCKED OFF MORE VOTERS THAN THE AMOUNT OF TIMES YOU'VE CHANGED YOUR NAME

PLEASE BLACK... YOUR GAY ASS NEEDS TO EASE BACK
you couldnt get a BUZZ off your raps if they was stuck in BEESWAX
WHENEVER HE GETS ON A STAGE THE CROWD YELLS "YO- HE'S WACK"
YOUVE BEEN IN A DICK SUCKIN POSITION SO MUCH THAT HIS KNEES CRACK

SON YOUR TRASH - YOUR MOUTH SHOULD BE A TESTICS - BIN
TRY AND TEST THIS WIN-
ILL GAVE MORE PEOPLE IN YOUR HOUSE THAN A HOUSE OF MEXICANS

[CarsonJet-2k4]

nice drop.............................................. ....
time for some votes.....worthy opponent.
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[Judge Judy]

wen i saw the battle i thought cars would be merkin but steel sounded hot.........breakdown:-

origanality=steel
punches=tie
vocab/wordplay=not enough
metas=steel
flow=cars...................

al thats needed..................

overall=steel

hit this up wen both verses bin posted.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=81063

[Under Dawg]

steelfist got this

he had better punchlines.. and a better verse.. good shit by both emcess though

[C_Drama]

I gotta give this one to steelfist, harder punches and they more funnier too

OVerall Steelfist hit harder

Carson's punches didnt came out so hard

Vote = Steelfist

[Steelfist]

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ..............................................

[sILLable]

nice battle, carsons verse lacked good punches,lacked multis,lacked rhyme scheme,steel fists verse had good punches,moderate multis,good rhyme scheme,over all nice drop.~1~


my vote---steelfist

[Steelfist]

uppin for more votes............................................. .................................................. ..................

[MR. Spits]

mad props to both but im gonna give it to steelfist cause he came just a bit harder wit his punchs and thats what gave him the edge on this battle tight shit by carson but ya didnt come hard enought props to both much respect holla peace