Syntext vs Verbal Concepts

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16 lines
5 votes to win
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[verbal concepts]

iiht dats wuts good i like ur ruelz and i like dat u spit and do ya thing.......Checkin in homie .....

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ready


[color=green]**antray**

i'm splittin this kids future your fate is niether near or far....Featherd then tarred your like Fresh meat in prison your truly Droppin Cold BARS~/~

**appatizer**

this kids homo couldn't be labeld for wearing hot shit in a DIAPER....i'mma mass murder dunni but you coming with blank shells like a forgetful SNIPPA(AIM NAME)~/~
You get 3 to life for this i'm gving this kid ABUSE VERBALLY...your AZZ BACKWORDS thought you could dodge death and BATTLED ME~/~

**MAIN COURSE**

split cells neurons in a chaotic stat i take this cat back to DNA....you were DEAD ON ACCEPTANCE cause SYN leaves newbs DOA~/~
I know you like the bars i spit like prison mates waiting for slippery hands......disrupting glands have this kid WETTED bad shit just look at his PANTS~/~
scarred of the EFFECTS and the CAUSE that you willing accepted this slaughter....LIL homo in drag with mixed signals like mothers dressing they son up like DAUGHTERS~/~

**DESSERT**
the result of SYN i send kids to hell quicker then BLACK LUNGS of minors see...how you gonna cripple a vet underestimate cause i'm crushing the newb to RB.....(av)~/~

[verbal concepts]

syntext gotta be crazy , to be placed against me , let alone face me //
I'm hazarddous to your safe-ty , so start " scratchin " at you lines , aint no way to erase-me
//
Bitch you couldn't be " Ill " if your name was labeled with " Infection " //
You couldn't " raise " to my mental without viagra induced "erection " //
So I'm armin every "weapon" and causin you " mass destruction " //
" Climaxin " this herb , it's time for the " eruption " //
Whippin ya ass with concept werdz , verbals , punches and meta-phors //
There aint no way this is even , why a dude like me " FACIN-WHORES " //
Whatchu waitin-for , lyrically wagin-wars , I really dont know why I continue
waistin-more //
It's like you facin-four , slammin you from every angle of possibility //
Hittin you so hard even ya moms and pops is feelin-me //
Spiritual tranquility , calmly "craftin" your demise in my " wood-work " //
Prolly sittin there thinkin , "those punches I throw at him COULD-hurt" // (sytext
scared!!0
Understood-syn? , this is "elementary" so write this down this "lesson" and don't forget it remember wut crew u in
//
I know it's hard for you to " swallow " it all , just be careful and don't " spit it " //

"'done dats 15 or 16 linez

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ayo lets got some votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........................................

[ålphå bë†]

Pretty Weak Battle.Both Emcees Had Some Ok Lines.Ima Have To Go Wit Verbal On This One.He Had A Few Strong Punches.Both Need To Elevate


vote-Verbal

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aight aight uppin on this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

[verbal concepts]

iight just vote.............................................. .................................................. ................

[verbal concepts]

c'mon man please vote dont sleep on dis shit son.....uppin for votes........... we just need some votes...

[Parallex]

close shit here y'all. both had alright verses. Syntext, had a couple of stretched bars, but verbal had a few played lines in there. It comes down to punches, and I am going to have to go with syntext cos he had a few lines that really stood out. such as the opening line...lol
Vote=**~SynText~**

[verbal concepts]

lol dat wont a punch jack ass lmfao...dat wont even hittin toward me................................................ .................................................. ..........

[Chemarim]

nice battle

i think that verbal got it wit flow and punches
syn had stretched lines but some ok personals

vote-verb

[verbal concepts]

2-1 me................................................ .................................................. .........uppin for votes

[verbal concepts]

dam rb peoples stop sleepin shit upp dez votes............................................. .........

[C_Drama]

Syntext needs to work on his punches more

Verbal hit alot harder with better punches

It's like you facin-four , slammin you from every angle of possibility // (nice shit)

and he made good use of multis

Flow = Verbal
Multis = Verbal
Punches = Verbal
Pesonals = Syntext
Wordplay = None
Metas = Verbal

Vote = Verbal


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