J.Dubya vs A~Young~Gunner

[J.Dubya]

5 lines min; 15 lines max
40 mins from check in
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no prewritten
no recycling
no crew
no hate
no bite
no d.r.
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you spit 1st

[A~Young~Gunner]

aight yo checkin in ill drop now im, gunna write it ,this minute


hea it goes:::



I'll cut ur throat wit a wet blade flowin~wit~ur~blood
ur words still wouldn't come out flowin~like~a~flood
Like lil kim at the vma's i'm exposin~ur~womanly~features
i'll tie him up and throw him in da disposal to decompose~dis~creature
My verse may sound like britney but i atleast i'll hop~on~da~mic
Ur pussy in da way u explain can't do audios cuz u can't cop~a~mic
J.Dubya is the antonym for how ur lame~punches~sound
And to think that ur only gay verse is hall of fame~bound
pm'n me askin when r u spittin is it gonna~be~today
Battle me so i get a litte respect i dont wanna~be~gay
Ur shit hits like a bee sting then floats~off~like~a~butterfly
fuk'n textce if we did this audio style what I wrote~would~make~u~cry
I'll stick my mic down my ur throat then u'll know what words feel~like
Dont fret a lot of great lyricist ghost write and wont ever
deel~wit~the~mic

[J.Dubya]

Aight dogg, i'ma start my verse
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[J.Dubya]

Like a blind person you can't see the light/This a fight in the night, I darken your sight//
Time for a lesson in Rapology, take a seat/Put ur verse on the street but it aint concrete//
You a slave so here the shovel, dig ur grave/Stuck ur head in the ocean but no brain wave//
Get used to that 0 it aint will never change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//
Your verse was like me receivin a shit stain/Just reading it caused me eye strain and pain//
You release so much waste, like pissin in stalls/Even as a b-ball coach you wouldn't have balls//
Call yourself a pimp because of your clothes/Tie girls to a rope, the only way u could pull hoes//
Your like a bubble that hasn't yet been burst/This battle has a new title: “The Best Meets the Worst”//
Worked at a gift shop, got fired, u couldn't rap/Ya didn't know this was comin, like a booby trap//
Look at these punches, it's like I'm Muhammad Ali/This will result in a KO, the referee's at three//
I left you in the dust when you were chasin my verse/You still couldn't back your shit up if you spit in reverse//
Back is against the ropes, my hand 'round ur throat/“I'm merked, ya even got my vote” was your death quote//

[J.Dubya]

Sorry bout the structure y'all, it fucked it all up when I posted it.
It's supposed to go .../...// for each line. But anyways, UPPIN for votes.
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[J.Dubya]

Get used to that 0 it aint will never change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//

should say...

Get used to that 0 it aint never gon' change/Wouldn't be able to hit me if ya fired from close range//

[A~Young~Gunner]

yo wats that yo u have like 3 diffrent lines in a differnt post (freepost... lol...). you couldove just edited it :::...:::...V0TeZ

[Alchemy]

Vote:J

Why:Your shit was so much out of order that I almost dident vote for you. Everything else topped Young pretty mcuh, but learn to get htat stuff organized dude.

Young-Elevate and get those lines longer, don't stretch them though, good drop but try an elevate.

[J.Dubya]

Sorry to break it to ya newbie but ya can't edit your posts in Front Lines. UPPIN!
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[Alchemy]

Hey J: Here is the link to the battle I need you to hit up.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...435#post774435

[Real-T]

J Dubya took this from start to finish.
Some of my favorite lines are:
Time for a lesson in Rapology, take a seat/Put ur verse on the street but it aint concrete//

You a slave so here the shovel, dig ur grave/Stuck ur head in the ocean but no brain wave//

You release so much waste, like pissin in stalls/Even as a b-ball coach you wouldn't have balls//

Call yourself a pimp because of your clothes/Tie girls to a rope, the only way u could pull hoes//

I left you in the dust when you were chasin my verse/You still couldn't back your shit up if you spit in reverse//

[J.Dubya]

Thanks dogg, but please don't post if ya can't vote. UPPIN!
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[MethodZ]

GUNNER- OK WORDPLAY & FLOW, SOME DIDN'T MAKE SENSE
FROM WHAT I SEEN YOU PUT "~" JUST TO SHOW THE 2 BARS RHYMED AT THE END, THATS POOR CONSISTENCY
BARELY PERSONAL & VOCAB WAS MINOR

J.DUBYA- OK WORDPLAY, PUNCHES I SEEN
NO PERSONALS, FLOW WAS OK
NO VOCAB BUT OPENER WAS BETTER THAN GUNNER'S, SO WAS WORDPLAY
BRAIN WAVE LINE WAS THE BEST OUT OF THE VERSE

VOTE= J.Dubya

^^dat very well explained....

VOTE= J.Dubya

[J.Dubya]

UPPIN (4)
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[Raz]

I agree wit all tha past ppl........J took this shit, Young needs to elevate and sharpen his skillz up..................

Vote:J