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  1. #1
    prophiit
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    fLiP fLoP

    in stark contrast to my usual display of overbearing performance
    i refuse to gorge on my inner need to mold to conformance
    and though at times my views and thoughts may be distorted
    my opinion matters DAMMIT what i thinks important
    for those who blow me off and dismiss me as just another NIGGER
    think long and hard about who YOU are not so hot now mister?
    i've been kicked when i was down broken and defeated
    to the brink i've layed dangerously till i retreated
    i believe i am the best at times but am not conceited
    imagine if this was how ya kids was treated

    lets go

    Verse 1

    i'm not violent but by no means do i keep the peace
    i've felt the streets and seen peeps lay deceased
    theres no wisdom in the loss of human life
    when will my people finally see tha light and get it right
    my anger at these tormented and demented foes
    whose only quest is to divide my people and multiply my woes
    froze i lay in the depths of this cold mortuary
    stop to compose what i emote cuz this pain is so scary
    imagine a world free of death and destruction
    fuck it i'd give a nut to see my block a step above disgusting
    i'm sick of listening to guns busting back to the above discussion

    chorus/style switch:
    sick of this lack of intelligent thought cats caught
    to many thought that the price is based on what ya bought
    courts full overturned judicial system wishes turned to riches
    back to rags and our daughters missing think and listen
    then speak.
    those who want enlightment have a seat and make a difference

    Verse 2

    spoken word content lyrically deserved worked my nerves
    barely seen and for the most part unheard
    part the sea to reach and touch the dead sea scrolls
    acid memories leak and i stoop to beseech these trolls
    a mystic ocurrence is occuring skill level opened is emerging
    watch as this humble man grows flow burgeons
    add a shot of bourbon and suddenly its perfect
    take a journey as we search the murky skies
    hidden eyes this bodies my mortal disguise
    lurking in mystic purpose purchase perchance
    hurts this cryptic circus focused on the greed of heartless merchants
    and on the song plays as we all drown in sorrow
    today was fucked up can't wait until tommorow


    chorus/style switch:
    sick of this lack of intelligent thought cats caught
    to many thought that the price is based on what ya bought
    courts full overturned judicial system wishes turned to riches
    back to rags and our daughters missing think and listen
    then speak.
    those who want enlightment have a seat and make a difference

    as i journey holding this piss pot i spit on hip hop
    spoke blasphemous born to get shot
    see gangsta talk about drugs and millimeters
    not me i just chill and keep and ill demeanor
    i wanna see if the grass on tha otha side is greener
    not a leader but not exactly a follower either
    i strain my brain to focus on what really matters
    though i'm torn and tattered tragically splattered
    i revolve around rap like the rings of saturn
    see the pitter patter pitifully broken battered
    imagine crimson mist dripped from wrists slit
    each of us lives in the dark dank abyss
    so excuse me miss if i'm remiss in stating this
    words ain't shit so fuck your diss..............1



    3 different beats and no real topic just off tha top of my head

  2. #2
    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    yo son this was mad raw your vocab amplification is unimaginable you began so raw son im feeling you no doubt stay doing your thing twin.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

  3. #3
    aintgonnastop
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    that shit was awesome, vocab couldnt have been better, and that shit was just great. keep postin dude.

  4. #4
    WeRd-smith
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    as i journey holding this piss pot i spit on hip hop
    spoke blasphemous born to get shot
    see gangsta talk about drugs and millimeters
    not me i just chill and keep and ill demeanor
    i wanna see if the grass on tha otha side is greener
    not a leader but not exactly a follower either

    was pretty dope had some okay vocab but the flow was alright. keep working at it dawg you'll elevate.

  5. #5
    prophiit
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    up up and away

  6. #6
    StOrMiN lYrIcS
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    that was some hot shit,
    u had a wide vocab, loved
    the concept ~~~~~keep it up

  7. #7
    prophiit
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    uppin

  8. #8
    prophiit
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    upping

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