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  1. September 3rd, 2003, 09:23 PM #1
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    I'll Never Quit

    People think i'mma dick, cuz of the way i spit (what?)
    always bringin emotions, and my people into my shit
    it's not my fault, you bitches probly deserve it (yup)
    my anger? there's just no way i can conserve it
    always being dissed, pissed, never missed (true)
    you wonder why i bring you bitches into this

    ayo look

    My rhymes will make you cry, make ya wanna die
    slit your wirst, and wanna commit suicide
    with a gak by my side, y'all think i'm livin a lie
    i ain't tryin to be black, i'm just a plain white guy
    gettin shit of my chest, doin what's best
    don't give a damn, if you are impressed
    take a look at my rhymes, swallow and digest
    i ain't quite evil, but i'm half possessed
    I'm a Demonic Discisple, not quite the devil
    i'll elevate some more, then soon be at that level

    when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
    gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
    i'll always commit, and do it legit
    gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit

    Better watch your back when i'm near
    cuz i'll stab ya, then dissapear
    make you shed a tear, when i steal your career
    when krem comes around, your better stand clear
    cuz i'm ballistic realistic, just plain linguistic
    go ahead and temp me, i'm sadistic
    droppin rhymes, here there everywhere
    next one could be bout you, so ya better prepare
    writing rhymes just outta no where
    come a knocking, and ya better beware

    when i spit i spit...don't give a shit
    gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit
    i'll always commit, and do it legit
    gettin shit off da chest, i'll never quit

    just somthing
    uppin for feedback
    peace
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  2. September 3rd, 2003, 09:41 PM #2
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    with a gak by my side, y'all think i'm livin a lie
    i ain't tryin to be black, i'm just a plain white guy

    that's wat i'm talkin about, enough of tha black racists, shit^^^

    one problem: simple wit simple wordplay although there was some wordplay in it, jus keep elevatin...

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  3. September 3rd, 2003, 09:44 PM #3
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    thanks
    keep uppin with the feed back
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  4. September 3rd, 2003, 10:55 PM #4
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  5. September 4th, 2003, 01:06 AM #5
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    i agree simple but you got the point out in a catchy way that is enough to interest me so to me this is hot keep doing you i like this
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  6. September 4th, 2003, 11:51 AM #6
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    that was good your vocab was prity good, i really liked ur concept
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  7. September 4th, 2003, 02:52 PM #7
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    thanks y'all

    keep uppin
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  8. September 4th, 2003, 03:59 PM #8
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    Yo, good shit and I have to bandwagon on this one, just a little simple, but sometimes, that's how you have to keep shit to really lock that meaining in there. Good shit and I felt it...
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  9. September 4th, 2003, 04:08 PM #9
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    yup...this was indeed simple...but to the point...you got ya message across really well just try to expand the vocab a lil' and add some multiez...but overall this was good...holla
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  10. September 4th, 2003, 04:09 PM #10
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    ^^^the vocab was good good though...it just could be better...
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  11. September 4th, 2003, 05:21 PM #11
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    man... you usin a style similiar to mine so I was really feelin that shit... I like the concept and shit... me and you'd prolly make a good battle... but anyways man... kkeep that shit up homie..
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  12. September 4th, 2003, 05:29 PM #12
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    no doubt
    thanks ya'll

    keep uppin
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  13. September 4th, 2003, 10:26 PM #13
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  14. September 4th, 2003, 10:34 PM #14
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    feels like you tryna be eminem, but what eva :S its was aight, keep elevating bruv
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  15. September 5th, 2003, 01:01 AM #15
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