CEREAL (original shyt by ME!!!)

[Well Versed]

i do trix with tha work its all white like a rabbit
im coocoo for these coco puffs like its a bad habbit
i got my lucky charmz on me nah mayn not tha marsh mellows
my blue moonz are blastin shootin starz threw these lame fellows
im high as red baloons when im on these fukin rainbowz
no green hats i only got my black mask n black clothez
with a purple horseshoe spaceship lightin up so it glowz
n i got no red heartz im jackin pots of gold from these hoez
mayn imma capn like crunch just peep tha pirate ship
i got black stripes like a tiger n black flagz reppin crip
pplz think im retarded loadin POPz all up in my clip
these lames turn into cherrioz when i let em thangz rip
when u see KING just know im frosted like some flakes
i got a honey comb drop top with crunch berry skates
dont try n apple jacks me ill cook u up like some stakes
nah these are all name brand i dont mess with em fakes
ill eat em lames up with no milk just for kix
n dont never add sugar to tha real they dont mix
i got some family sized pakz better known as em brickz
tryin to get my eat on yeah i need me some lickz

dam imma general watch how i make my mealz
put milk with work mix it up u know tha dealz
its that special K shyt cuz i gotta pay my billz
n i rele need those honey bunches of oats on tha realz
so u know im up in tha trap cookin up em golden gramz
im talkin rice crispy treats they pure white like lambz
that work can get ya life but nah i dont give a damz
i just keep movin that work tryin to stack my chex
n i want em fruity pebbles draped all round my neckz
i got countchocula hoez n all they craves is sex
mayn ur name aint lucky so u better not flex
dont get wrong n ill cinnamon toast crunch tha street
serve revenge cold like cereal but i always got my heat
bullets like marsh mellows leave ya lookin like shreaded wheat
dam em thangz hit so hard theyll knock ya shoes off ya feet
toast ya like em squarez n turn ya into golden crispz
u lames fruity like loopz yall talkin with some lispz
KING aint with that get from round me or get smacks
im closing down shop get my totalz n count my stacks
i sold alot of work cuz i keep em varity pakz
n if ya want ill give ya a spoon full of shellz from my macz


EAT THAT HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!



dude i was just fukin round on this shyt...imma record it sometime...hey heres a FUN GAME...can u name all tha cerealz i listed?! Get at me pplz...drop em commentz...n i will RTF...keep it pimpin mayn!!!

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[Issue]

i do trix with tha work its all white like a rabbit
im coocoo for these coco puffs like its a bad habbit
i got my lucky charmz on me nah mayn not tha marsh mellows
my blue moonz are blastin shootin starz threw these lame fellows
im high as red baloons when im on these fukin rainbowz
no green hats i only got my black mask n black clothez
with a purple horseshoe spaceship lightin up so it glowz
n i got no red heartz im jackin pots of gold from these hoez
mayn imma capn like crunch just peep tha pirate ship
i got black stripes like a tiger n black flagz reppin crip
pplz think im retarded loadin POPz all up in my clip
these lames turn into cherrioz when i let em thangz rip
when u see KING just know im frosted like some flakes
i got a honey comb drop top with crunch berry skates
dont try n apple jacks me ill cook u up like some stakes
nah these are all name brand i dont mess with em fakes
ill eat em lames up with no milk just for kix
n dont never add sugar to tha real they dont mix
i got some family sized pakz better known as em brickz
tryin to get my eat on yeah i need me some lickz

dam imma general watch how i make my mealz
put milk with work mix it up u know tha dealz
its that special K shyt cuz i gotta pay my billz
n i rele need those honey bunches of oats on tha realz
so u know im up in tha trap cookin up em golden gramz
im talkin rice crispy treats they pure white like lambz
that work can get ya life but nah i dont give a damz
i just keep movin that work tryin to stack my chex
n i want em fruity pebbles draped all round my neckz
i got countchocula hoez n all they craves is sex
mayn ur name aint lucky so u better not flex
dont get wrong n ill cinnamon toast crunch tha street
serve revenge cold like cereal but i always got my heat
bullets like marsh mellows leave ya lookin like shreaded wheat
dam em thangz hit so hard theyll knock ya shoes off ya feet
toast ya like em squarez n turn ya into golden crispz
u lames fruity like loopz yall talkin with some lispz
KING aint with that get from round me or get smacks
im closing down shop get my totalz n count my stacks
i sold alot of work cuz i keep em varity pakz
n if ya want ill give ya a spoon full of shellz from my macz


EAT THAT HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!



dude i was just fukin round on this shyt...imma record it sometime...hey heres a FUN GAME...can u name all tha cerealz i listed?! Get at me pplz...drop em commentz...n i will RTF...keep it pimpin mayn!!!

Im surprised this was quite good, man. How did you manage so many different cereals? lmao. The vocabulary was a little bit caged but you ran with the subject, and impressed me lol.

Sometimes, as a writer, it's good to get loose and just express anything for the sake of it. You did that hear, I'll take a lot of good things from this man. For one, I'd take it and show people who say topical writers are all poets & serious and can't do anything else, you've done yourself proud by staying on topic and not going off on one.


Overall, this was a nice, neat, fun little piece of work brother, good one

[YoungPlayer]

This was Ight lol You look like that you was thinking on Cereal when you did this, This never been done lol great keep it up.

[Genycis]

words had a bit of throw-off for me, but overall fam, I like the concept of this alot... never done before, but nicely worked.. you used alot of cereals on the lyrics. lol, was there a cereal you DIDN'T put in the mix? Lol.. good shyt fam, keep writing...

[Well Versed]

yo thanx for all tha FEED guyz...yeah this was written a while bak...not new at all...imma keep tha HITZ commin...a new one evryday!!!

[McFly]

Damn, I came into this thinking it would be nothing like it was, you really impressed me man. Awesome concept, good flow, nice rhymes, straight up a good piece. Of course you kept on the topic with cereal, and for the most part you kept the piece going in the same direction, it was a good read.

Some of my favorite lines were:
"...i got my lucky charmz on me nah mayn not tha marsh mellows
my blue moonz are blastin shootin starz threw these lame fellows..."

"...leave ya lookin like shreaded wheat..."

"...cookin up em golden gramz..."

Keep it up man, I really liked that one.

[Well Versed]

lol thanx bruh super old shyt...newer n better shyt droppin evryday...

[The Seven]

this is DOPE dude...serious imagination and creativity bro
dont wanna boost your head much too though
but you got good writing and some magnanimous flow
cuz youre dope..ill as pumpin caps in the pope no joke
whatever you smoke ill take two tokes
man if you get a pirate ship ill bring the rope
flow like snow in the nose of old hos with frizz in they fros
bust out like an old couch with springs that smell like strohs.....lol..

[Well Versed]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa that was tight homie...yeah i aint got no EGO...they just cant beat me cuz i rap bout what no one else does...so i am FIRST anywayz...more shyt commin pplz bet that!!!

[Well Versed]

UPPED for THA OGz!!!

[Chef Boy]

It was an awesome concept, and you made it work. Interesting piece, flow went pretty well vocab was ok, and there were some awesome lines
my favorite line:
"so u know im up in tha trap cookin up em golden gramz"

Please RTF if you get the chance!

[Well Versed]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa thanx homie...pplz be sleepin on me dude...yo BE A FAN!!!...come join my friendz shyt...

[Kapital J]

ha i tried rappin bout cereal b4 but the only thing i could come up wit was "I'll roll dis nigga up like a blunt, call him a coco puff" lol

nice shit man

[Well Versed]

lol thats funny bruh...creativity is my STRONG SUIT...i dont battle at all...lost my first one...so imma stick with this shyt...get at me fam!!! JOIN THA FAN CLUB!!!

[Johnny 6-feet]

Actually i'm gonna give you points for originality. You managed to lace that cereal metaphor shit all the way through this piece, and it was long. Original shit is hard to come by, this kind of reminded me of lupe fiasco's shit 'gotta eat' or something. Wokr on your vocab and your rhyme scheme a little more. But yeah, props.

Thanks for the rep. Keep posting.