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Topic: Off My Chest
Evolve
Fgee
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You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection
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Hopefully, this won't get slept on like my last SS battle.................
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
fragments of light cascade across my sight
shades of black and white invade the night
its a fight just to stay awake and write
eyes are focused tight, glued to the screen
words are formed thru letters being teamed
sounds and sylobols come together clean
the flow picks up steam, verse takes shape
verbs are placed into their fitted case
each space represents time to think
smash thru mental blocks confining the links
every setence's connection uniquely distinct
till fatigue sets in, sleep is on the brink
attention span shirnks, hard to piece the puzzle
eyes are in trouble as tiredness doubles
time expires, each second collected is subtle
thoughts once so loud.. are now distorted and muffled
my mind wonders as my eye lids slowly close
got to finish this piece.. so i'll only doze
next thing you know its morning & the computer froze
my mirror exposed.. sleep marks and keyboard imprints
never write sleep deprived, just save and print it
prose didnt survive, never should’ve tried to finish it
now those images become unlimited ports of stress
mad at myself for coming up short in text
all because I tried to force the thoughts off my chest
Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
evolve i been busy as fuck
heres something quik
but if its alright ill drop a proper one 2moro?
an extraordinary woman going about a simple life
pure and concise moralistic without a vice
positively light radiating radiations glow
million dollar smile to show white as snow
skin without a fold perfect in everyway
exposed skin naked and on display
she had it made money for revelations
made the camera patient loving the lens facial
posing in labels ass tits and navel on view
assets to woo larger than life but needed new
implanted with a bruise x-rays reveal a flaw
it rocked her to the core cancerous pores
in scores they inhabited cells the silent killers
she'd concealed hers now fate delivered sealer
a woman beater this poison had grabbed her breast
during operations test she got something off her chest
You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection
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Uh, Im Not Sure If I Have To Break This Down. Evolve Won This For Obvious Reasons, Such As, More Effort. I Thought This Was Gonna Be A Descent Battle But Im Fooled. Vote Evolve.
He Had A Descent Concept And Good Flow And Kept My Intrest. Blah
Evolves time and effort really showed compared to Fgee's. not that Fgee had a bad verse cuz it was good for a keyed one but the concept and presentation was not as good as Evolves
vote=Evolve
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Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
I truly did like fgee's, just wanna say that. But Evolve, yours just clicked with me, we have all been there. Their is nothing else to say, fgee, great verse, nice lil flip, but it look like evolve was making flapjacks.
Vote-Evolve
Please check out my battle, even if they both no show, and give some response.
- MadMan -
Former Administrator's: Yes, We're That Much Better
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ok respect that
at least ur cracking down on late verses....
good drop evolve...ur lucky i only had 10 minutes to spare
You need Ghost Dog in your DVD collection
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LOL.. my drop only took me 10 minutes too........................
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Rappers sound the same man, found 1 game plan & ran through it
They all got that Geico flow.. Cause even a cave man can do it
ArtificialIntelligence
AI
Good pieces to both of you. Though it took you basically no time to do your pieces, i have to give this to Evolve for an overall better drop. Not saying that i didn't like Fgees but Evolve's came out alot better.
Vote-Evolve
Hence Forward.. BURR!
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Just watch My Back, I got the front.
I Also Agree That Evolve Won This For Better Verse Content..
And A Much Better Thought Out Verse, No Disrespect To Fgee..
But , As He Said.. Rushed... Didnt Feel Any Emotion Put Into It..
Vote: Evolve
Good Battle Guys...
Next Week You Will Both Be At (1-1)
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