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    ~Spoken Word~

    ~Kicks Back....Watches Tel Lie Vision....Writes~

    Bodysnatchers Wanna Come About To
    Intercept The Visions, These Visions
    Of True Christians....True Catholicism
    Whos With Em?

    Homosexual Priests That Claim Theyre Not Comittin,
    Sins While They're Abominations,Got My Nomination!

    Theres Not Many Things That God Dosent Approve Of,
    Brainwashing For Five Hundred Alex(?!?!)
    These Individuals Need To Cool Off
    And Rejuvinate Their Principles,

    Sunday Morning Saints To Monday Morning Sinners,
    Food For Thoughts Served As Daily Brunch
    They Often Wonder Whats For Dinner, (?!?!)

    A Night Cleansed Of....The Stinch Of,
    Child Mollestation..More Friends (?!?!)
    Last Meal Reenactments (?!?!)
    Alter Boy Pagents...Idolizing Michael Jacksons (?!?!)

    Whats In The Center Of The Frame Is Tainted
    But Who Has Ever Aced A "Purity" Test, Right?
    Run Along And Splash Your Holy Water
    Like A Good Little Boy Our Lives Will Just Be Perfect Now,
    But Whos "Pure"?...Wanna Know Whos Really "Pure"?

    Only One Who Predicted That They Would
    Say You Will See Death As We See It,
    Now Every Single Church Has The Story Remixed,

    Mormon Presbertarian Catholic Baptist Non Denominational,
    Non Confrontational With Exceptionally Well Skills At Acting......

    ~If I Have Offended Anyone......Good~

    ~Content~ "© All Rights Reserved"

    Peace
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    im not xactly down diggety wit the subject matter but the way u produced your scheme was good, the imagery was all that faltered, the depth was decent ur flow was consistent, a good drop, 1luv.
    Laying face down in the mainstream.
    Po.Ethics.

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    I can totally relate to your drop. I am sickend by all that goes on in our world today, then to see our moral icons crumble in front of us, is anything worth preserving anymore? I was taken back by all the new's, it's like if a 'bishop' is mearly 'pawn' on a chess board...(?!?!) You purposely went away from the heavy incryption in your style, that is noticealbe, but I understand your reason. Overall, this is a reflection of your style, diluted for a purpose. Great subject and nice way to hold your ground at the end. Much respect for your position on this subject. I have many piece's on the same subject, I've been contemplating a post or two. Well like most artist, I raely submit a new piece, hot off the print, just need to evaluate the work for a while before I decide to post. It's always been that way for me, maybe I could break that habit here on RB? Great job..

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    I can relate to this piece. I mean now days everyone gots it twisted on how its gonna be in tha end but i guess they will never know till their dead which will be the end for them.Anyways i really liked this one.Well im out.Keep droppin!~1~

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    Thank You For Having Smart Eyes And Actually
    Taking The Time To Look Into A Persons Lyrics

    Last edited by Content; August 8th, 2003 at 11:24 PM
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    I don't get it. Seriously.

    Unless your being morbidly inadvertantly ironic on purpose, then I don't get it.

    But I tried, I really did.

    ~Shalom~

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    Varentao Under Necromancers Name Possibly...
    Sorry That You Didnt Get It Varento/Necro..

    Is It Okay To Mollest Children?
    Brainwash Children..Society For That Matter?
    The Attempt Was To Be Serious Not Funny

    If I have Offended You..Good
    You May Realize Your Church
    Isnt Perfect If You Go To Church At All..

    My Prupose Was To Get A Rise Out Of You
    And Go Against The Grain..And It Seems Like
    I May Have Pinced A Nerve

    I Catholic Schooled Part Of
    My Life And Knowing Of What
    People Have Done Makes Me Sick
    So I Wrote This Shit

    Most Of The Bible...Fine
    Priests.....Not Fine
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    ~Uppin...Drowning~
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    My Purpose Was To Get A Rise Out Of You
    And Go Against The Grain..And If It Seems
    Like I May Have Pinched A Nerve I Have
    Accomplished My Mission...

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    You did go straight at it. Going right to the heart of some matters. Tearing into hypocrisy and people turning blind eyes. How power, though hollow, is still followed. But only to what the masses want to follow it to. Along those lines is what i got out of it. But hey, it wasn't all that cryptic in general, as you said.

    Some parts i'm not so sure about. A bit edgey and over bearing in opinion, yet the cynical irony is not strong enough to make it 'good'.

    But nonetheless, using extremes to get the point across (albeit, a bit tainted..)..

    ..resp...

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    Nah, i aint Necro. Neither was i using his account.
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    You asked me to put time in to read other people's drops, and I am doing. But I'm pretty much new to writing and probably considerably younger than you. What you wrote is incredible, but right over my head.

    But I hope you get more help from people who can relate to your drops and understand um.
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