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    Question Tongue Elixir

    A little keystyle poem i did cause im feelin emotions, feedback please...

    the block tale begins with burnt store owners leaking from niggas claimin they men~
    pourin forties in cups i begin slayin a ten searchin for fame through my pen~
    sprayin through dented friends turned crooked by the pussy prize ink emits from the g-lock~
    real and dealin in the gift called present i extend rap heaven wit eternal street hop~
    my 2nd home stays raided often prayin i soften watchin my phony homie laid in coffin~
    a black man caught by klansmen couldnt hang wit me between the paper's margins~
    i..utter my ill awful words fly by gutters with chilling thoughtful verbs~
    exit the enigma of life by an annoying slug and now my life and deaths perturbed~
    dirty ink floods reality my heart filled with malice, g's~
    as they explore this existence i feel the need to deny truth emphatically~
    no need to ride wit a rebel with lost causes seepin his dome~
    my words over weeded this poem releases my peace like a chrome~
    the streets is my home but six deep awaits me as my dreams hit~
    i dont mean shit i spit blind and rap about death cause with a pen i seen it~

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    elevation is key, holla back if any feedback could be given 1luv.
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    elevatin.....comon just drop some thoughts, i appreciate it, 1luv.
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    i liked tha shit,it was hot, good multis,i dig ya style,i think youd be real tight in open mic but thats my opinion,keep on droppin kid,~1~


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    thanks man, and nah i can drop open mics but my raps is a little bit edgier and easy flowing then my poetry i prefer the depth of my poems, any more feedback??? 1luv.
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    Didnt Seem Like A Keystyle...
    Talent-wise..Off The Hook...


    my 2nd home stays raided often prayin i soften watchin my phony homie laid in coffin~
    a black man caught by klansmen couldnt hang wit me between the paper's margins~

    ~Nyce Flow To It..Reminiscent Of Nas~

    Nice Flow Altogether And Good "Keystyle"

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    thanks and yeh t was entirely a keystyle it took m aprox. 6 minutes to do, and im really feelin Nas' style he'smy biggest musical influence, surprised that u saw a comparison, thanks for your comments, elevation is key, 1luv.
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    i really liked tha last two lines!
    keep droppin~la8 5gs im out!
    ~Pz

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    ^thanks mama i appreciate the feedback 1luv.
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    Nice Pieace G...U Got Skill Man...Tight Multis..Dope Verse..Keep Doin' Ya Thang...1

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    good look X i respect your opinion thanks alot man, 1luv.
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