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    Precious lady (for my Daughter)

    This is a song, I put together for my daughter when here Mom and I broke up, it was a reminder of my love for her, no matter what. It reads kind of like a poem, so I decided to post. Thanks ahead of time for your time and comments...

    “PRECIOUS LADY”

    Destinie you’re always so kind
    Young and innocent, sweet and divine
    May your smile shine forever
    And you’ll always be mine
    Your Daddy’s love
    Is expressed, here in this rhyme
    Mija don’t you worry
    Everything will be fine

    Destinie
    My love will guide and carry you
    Till the end of time
    The lessons that I teach
    Will sharpen your mind
    The inspiration that I preach
    Will keep you out of bind

    Destinie
    Listen to your father
    And just open your mind

    Hold back them tears
    And put away your fears
    Daddy will always
    And forever be near
    From you I promise
    I will never steer clear
    Guide and protect you
    You know I’ll always be here

    Your Daddy’s love is here to stay
    On my knees for your happiness,
    I do pray
    With every single smile,
    You brighten up my day
    I will never forget the times
    When we laugh and play


    Destinie
    My precious lady did I tell you
    That I love you today?
    Even when you’re bad
    You know I love you anyway
    Destinie
    No matter what happens
    I’m going to love you anyway


    Destinie
    My precious lady did I tell you,
    That I love you today?
    Even when you’re bad
    You know I love you anyway

    I never knew happiness
    Until the day we had you
    When you came into my life
    A promise I made you
    Looked into you eyes,
    Hypnotized by you
    As a new father,
    I didn’t know what to do
    Provide, guide and strengthen
    Is what I had to do

    Destinie
    Your father will always,
    be in love with you
    Little girl you make me proud
    With each and everything you do
    My love will forever guide,
    And direct you too
    Remember all the lessons
    That your father taught you
    I know you love me,
    And you know I love you
    Put your mind to it,
    And nothing will ever stop you

    Destinie
    I’m your father and I wrote this for you
    May your life be forever blessed
    And your heart forever true
    Little girl don’t you know
    Your Dad’s in love with you….

    By: Bouncedoggydog inspired by Destinie Blanca Hernandez (My Daughter now age 7)
    Last edited by Bounce; July 25th, 2003 at 08:08 PM

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    this was very nice...
    very touching.
    good flow, and a lot of feeling into the song

    keep writing straight from the heart

    peace
    Much too dangerous
    Meet the perfect stranger
    I'm the extreme case of fire and anger
    The misguided angel with deep routed fears
    My face shows the years of blood sweating tears
    Pay attention, this gypsy that deeply senses
    Evil spirits lurking behind picket fences
    Embarking darker images and skeletal remains
    Cold hearted soldier with ice in his veins

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    Thanks for the reply split-eyez, I will keep the emotion in my work, as long as there is emotion in me.

    Peace out...

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    This was so damn nice!

    So sweet, smooth and flowing. With a simplicity that brought out such quaint beauty and streaming emotions.

    ...no criticism. Very nice piece bounce..

    ..resp...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    Good Stuff

    I enjoyed reading it

    full of emotion which i loved to read it has inspired me to put more thought and emotion into thhe things i write now so thanks for that Bounce

    Peace Out!

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    damn dawg u got the emotion in u and u can really tell u love your daughter alot brings the true person out of u
    and that wad just excellent really enjoyed that it was real good

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    Thank you all for your comments, I really appreciate all the great reply's.

    Varentao I really admire and respect your work, so it's nice to hear you dropping reply's on mine, I take your critic very seriously. It all about elevating so any advice you offer, I am always more than willing to consider....

    Disaster thanks for the comment, and I was blown away over that insperation part. I never heard that before, thanx


    JKO good looking out dawg, and yes your right, my daughter is my life. I would be lost without her, she's my best friend and collaberator. We rap together, write together and have a great relationship...

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    Beautiful Name Doggy..If I Have A Girl
    Id Like Her To Be Named Kaylie You
    Touched On A Lot And With You Having
    The Gift To Put Your Thoughts On Paper
    And Express Yourself You MightBring To
    Life Some Artistic Aspects From Her Forreal

    Other Than Everything Ive Stated It Was Simple
    But It Realy Didnt Need To Be Compex Because
    It Was Real And Respectable Holla Back Peace
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    Thanks content, I gave her that name, Mom wanted to name her, some standard name. Kaylie is a very nice name, I wish you luck in the parent department, just take your time. Plan your child out, and just be real. Respect for the comments, stay up...

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    Yo Bounce that was nice man really well written and very easy to follow. Thats real cool that u care about your daughter that much, much respect to you for that. Much love for this poem man really much love. I like your writing style a lot keep writin man. Check my poem called war cry.

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    Thanks for your comments, I really do appreciate your feedback. It's nice to come across a young man that appreciates detail such as yourself, and really has a respect for a parental relationship. Kepp your head on str8, and stay up......Much respect...

    I'll check your's now...

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    Yo, man...

    Very good spit...

    I got a baby girl of my own so I know where ya comin from...

    Keep spittin, man...

    And lovin ya girl.

    Peace

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    Thanks for taking the time to read it. I'll keep spitiing if ya'll keep reading...

    Good looking out everyone, I appreaciate your insight,,

    Respect....

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    wow....surprising how much just a little one can inspire you..but they are beautiful arent they. I liked this.....one of the most heartfelt pieces i've read in a while...God bless.1..

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    bounce im liking ur work this was a hell of a drop very good n tuching keep it from the heart hell of a job keep spittin n elevating
    respect

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