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  1. #1
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    Next piece: "Pain"

    What u know about pain, slicin ya wrist..u sicka da rain//
    About livin everyday in vane..decay..and watchin ya closest bein slain//
    What you know about walkin through life eyes straight ahead//
    Family doesn’t know doc’s pronounce you mentally dead//
    A monotone beat plays through ya head//
    Ya wake up and think back to days u could recall//
    A time where you could remember joy, where u could play ball//
    Times where you could walk through the streets and not worry should the angel’s call//
    And not have to worry should your brother fall//
    You couldn’t imagine things in my life that I’ve saw//
    Night..day..snow..rain, they all the same, they all the game//
    They all still pain, they all for fame, naw they all for name//
    They all for respect//
    Yall wouldn’t know wat its like to work for a check//
    Yall wouldn’t know what its like to live by the teck//
    All u know about is what industry kats say in ya deck//
    That aint gangsta they neva seen life//
    They neva seen sorrow, They never seen strife//
    Pain is forever, u cant end it with a slice//
    Pain is eternal, wont end with a blow to the chest//
    Pain will never end, so move along with the rest……








    don't sleep on this...post some feedback

  2. #2
    Twiztid_chick69
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    I really feel the emotion in this peace...Parts of it was kinda simple...but overall it was nice Keep it up...

    peAce

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    yes it is good. but you might consider peeping the rules first.

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