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    Man....And his Words....

    it being a while i did poetry.....................
    peep and enjoy yo...........



    And me i have my words,and my glory
    being ignorant and completely convinced to deny
    my side of the story...
    is o.k cuz i experienced social hysteria,in daily matrimony....
    its now mandatory to remove the masks, to those blind to my side...
    so they align in disguise,and try to
    decriminalize my mind...
    realize im an individual that has yet to live my time...
    but the roads have a darker shed of life leaving some blind...
    to the strife experienced cuz i keep it silent...
    theres a better solution other than violence....
    but people sayin killin is neccessary and dividing necessety...
    the one race....no different shade divide and form hate...
    religion and seperation of state...
    the speculations hesitates my mind form...
    which still exists thru the storm...
    they dont acknowledge my mind form cuz like a sponge i absorb...
    common sense in harmony but they just refuse to
    listen and disregarding the...
    evidence that their over took by negligence and
    just claim im estimatin a proper preference...
    i cant deny my prescene....i gotta focus on tommorrow...
    the road of destiny is dark,and others hearts
    seem hollow...
    they confused by what they really follow..and
    claim its styles i borrow...
    but im the condensed author convinced by sorrow...
    that ill never turn my back on an individual
    never startle...
    gotta mantain a remarkable work ethic...cuz a
    common connection with another in affection has
    never been effective...
    i didnt earn any of my beliefs from my genetics...
    never hesitant..cuz i cant even get back a second...
    gotta focus on opportunity...
    thru the mental scrutiny obtained by hypocrit
    communities sayin that im not immune to the
    culture, that i choose...
    i remain enthused in my conquest of dark light...
    if its war they want cant afford to have stage fright...
    gotta let them know what they refuse to know that i disengage hype...

    Whats real is real.
    Keep it basic.....


    RuthLeSs Aka Intinct poet...

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    LaDy TrInItY
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    Nice piece...well you have the vocab of course...that comes from you flowin..but just next time i'd like to see more imagery..even tho this piece was good..i just know you..you can do some betta...God bless..1..

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    THANKS MA.............................damn u the only 1 repllied...lol



    RB FUckiN SLEEEEEEEPERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS..lol

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    A piece that went through the motions. Up and down...

    ...i did feel it was missing something. An edge that would've made it really grab the reader. But, the meaning was there, and it stood strong. And the way you went about it was also good. Trying to get intoi the complexities using a certain simplicity...

    ...square with some strong signs of cubism...

    ..resp...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    Yeh i knew this would be a nice drop ... well comin from ruthless its bound to be...

    Nice flow an good showing of emotions!!!

    Nice word play all the way through

    Likin this > "i cant deny my prescene....i gotta focus on tommorrow...
    the road of destiny is dark,and others hearts
    seem hollow..."


    Pz Bruv

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    That'z tha TITEST shit I've read today Ruthless...you blow me away! Fo Rilla

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^thanks and Wlc to RB...lol


    UPPUn on thiz Shit

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