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    ~Rap Or Reap~ (Worlds drama)

    it being a while i did an open MIC.....so peep.....


    O Negative as Justice...

    My people don't know what peace is... thats why they carry pieces
    And rock tattoos in the memory of deceased kids,
    In Afghanistan they droppin leaflets...
    It's propaganda... Cause we all know who the real thief is,
    The president and his shady cabinet... Caused Enron to collapse and
    Prolly usin tax dollars to support his family's drug habits,
    It's sad how the things on September 11th went...
    But ever since.. it's like shit in my hoods become irrelevant,
    My heart saddens cause now gunshots is "natural causes"...
    It don't even beat no more... it just naturally pauses,

    Jweaks as Equality...

    World’s equally challenged looking for complete balance,
    Combine human element, the power exceeds valence,
    Everyone seems violent, my apology for all mockeries,
    Social psychology, masses divided, no equality,
    Affects me solemnly, marked hatred passion, scars everlasting,
    Gay bashing, missing racial interaction, look to the sky blackened,
    The creator is saddened, blame his kids? All made from the same rib,
    Constitution forbid, was I written off on the way that we live?,
    Souls are hid, internally equivalent, outside appearance isn’t relevant,
    My void is evident, I’m equality, logically I’ll free us from hate and
    pestilence,

    Chimi as Love...

    Im a spiritual potion that keeps the life cycle in motion,
    Into ya flesh I enter, saved or sinner, on ground or floatin,
    Without me, hatred overtakes the human's mindframe rapidly,
    Im well-known, very much needed, I blind shame so you can "be",
    Birthed into the hearts of those who have opened up and recieved me,
    The world would have ended if my warmth hadn't made peeps believe me,
    I am the one who makes you forgive the murderers and drug dealers,
    I make you remember the past, but look to the future, a tough healer,
    Hold on to me, Im unstoppable, like the wind that blows whispers,
    Shed no tears, for I am here, Pass me on, For all souls Love delivers,


    thanks for peepin and Enjoy...................

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    That was some deep shit man ...

    I really liked your first stanza, especially the part about gun shot not being heard no more by police an the government,,,...

    Really tight peice keep up the good work homie ...

    Pz Bruva!!!

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    I'm likin this piece right here
    first verse was crazy and shit, the next verses were hott, but first stole the show.
    this was mad hot
    yo can you return the favor and peep the collab between me and rythmic tendicies called 110% Raw remix
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
    [YOUTUBE]seYxVBIsycE[/YOUTUBE]
    Just watch My Back, I got the front.

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^Thanks fam...Am feelin the apreciation ......i did this quick......


    UPPUN

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    damn from tha first line i was like ''daammn'' good shit dawg
    hard-felt.................... - O n e
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    yo that is a tight peace twin im feelin you no doubt twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Dope Shit Man..I Felt The Verse The Whole Way Through...This Is A 8.7/10...Keep Droppin Tight Stuff
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    trust bretherin... I was feelin' this on the real, havn't seen a written from u 4 a while, looks like you've been elevatin'... this was one of the deepest pieces I seen from you.. stay up dawg... 1
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    ^^^^^^^^I APRECIATE THE FEEDBACK KEEP EM COMING...............and yea it being a while i did a damn damn OPEN MIC......but this one took me also awhile to finish it....

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    lol..i like this kid..it reminds me of that new black eye pea song....lol..but anywayz....i fell off of tha flow for a bit..that coulda been me ya know...i like how you brought up enron..made me laugh..hollah..God bless..1..

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    this and all before it are never a dissapointment great peace dunny
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^Thanks whoever peeped this and gave thir comments or feedback....


    WUn

    UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

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    Defintelty feeling the work....Great use of words with a nice rythm to it...Definetly got alot of talent....But anyway.....Peice was hott...Keep em comin
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    "Affects me solemnly, marked hatred passion, scars everlasting,
    Gay bashing, missing racial interaction, look to the sky blackened,"


    Sick, Sick, Sick, Sick......
    Nice Drop Fam...........

    I really Enjoyed reading this, You should drop more of these open mics. Really Loved this.
    Good Lookin out on mine too, Thanks.....Keep it real man.....

    Done..
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    Any Audio Head Get At Me, Got A Question...Or More Of A Favor To Ask...Thanks


    Life Goes On.....

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    O Negative came correct wit his, the 2nd dude was a little out there are far as being able to put his thoughts down in a really solid manner, the love shyt was a nice touch a good way to end it off. Keep it balanced, thats the key to collaborations. I got a question for O-Negative though, ummm was the shyt in the hood ever relevant to anybody besides it's inhabitants? cause it wasn't in my hood.

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